@perfectfifths
Active 7 years, 5 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
Actually, I found this picture of Frankie Avalon on Pinterest, and minus the hair, which is too short and not curly enough, he probably looks quite similar.

And yeah, I’ve never imagined Quillon being particularly athletic or muscular. And yeah, Jonas is probably abnormally tall and good looking 😀 Kendall, not so much I don’t…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@catwing Hey! I’m here. So is @seekjustice 😛
We’re discussing her books, and arguing over what her characters should look like. Impertinent of me, isn’t it, telling an author what her own characters look like? 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Well, I didn’t start imagining him as Frankie Avalon until about yesterday. 😛 So it’s not that I’m used to Frankie Avalon. Most Frankie Avalon pictures do not even that closely fit the picture I have of Quillon, though. That one was really hard to find.
In my imagination, the changes to the picture would be these: I don’t have Qu…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
Hmm, interesting. I guess if I used to Frankie Avalon I might imagine him that way. This is the picture I’ve always had of him though:

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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice You asked how I imagined Quillon. Well, I couldn’t find an exact picture, but it’s almost like this, but with blue eyes, of course. 😉

What do you think? Is it extremely different from your picture?
Oh, in case you wonder, it’s Frankie Avalon. 😉
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Really really really? Let me read it!! 😀 😀 😀
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
Hmm, okay. I’ll think about that and try to think something up. 😀
Speaking of Justice and Jonas, I wrote a short story about them the other day 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Hm, that might make more sense. I thought Jonas knew a bit of Justice’s backstory already, but I guess, obviously, he doesn’t know all of it. And yes, that would definitely make for some good conversations in Empty. (window scenes…?? 😉 )
You’d have to find a reason for Chessy to kiss Justice anyway, right? I bet you could wo…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
Okay, that makes sense. So I just looked at the outline I wrote last year before I started the novel and I noticed that things go in this order:
Justice and Chessy go out to the trenches with some other people who aren’t named. Chessy kisses Justice and he gets angry and she runs away. Then Sapphire and Jonas turn up and he tells…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Bringing our discussion from both the second draft doc and Writers’ Corner here because I’m about to give you a long rant. 😛
After reading both the original draft and the second draft again in the “Chestice” conversation section, I figured out what the problem with it was.
Justice has ignored or put down Chessy for the entire…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Aww, @rochellaine, I wish I could!! I miss you, too! Hopefully I’ll be doing some writing soon.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@dekreel My friend-who-looks-like-a-wolf-but-says-she-is-not has been here, and I missed her again?? 🙁
Please, please, be on sometime when I’m also on!! I haven’t talked with you in FOREVER!!!
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Here I am, doubting myself again. XD
Thank you so much for the reminder. I really needed it. It’s easy to forget how God is in control of me and of everything.
Well, I’m going to sign off. It was good to see you! I’ll try to make a point to stop by more often… and read your book of course! 😉
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Joy replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Thanks for tagging me! I’m so excited to read it!! 😀 😀
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Maybe you shouldn’t be talking to the person who only writes retellings about this sort of stuff 😛
Seriously though, it’s completely okay if you only write fanfiction! I don’t think God’s ability to work through your stories is hindered at all by the fact that the settings/characters/whatever else, weren’t created by you. He’s…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
Guess what, guys? I FINISHED DRAFT TWO!!! Finally!
Now, I’m getting into some more editing, but before then, I’d love to have some beta readers comb through it and basically speak their mind on it.
I’m looking for about seven to ten betas, and I’ll be making a post on my blog looking inviting anyone to beta read, but I know some of you guys are…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Yeah, I lot of stuff has changed since I started coming by off and on.
These days the only stuff I write about is Aetherlight-related. I wish I had the inspiration to write something unique and original, not relying on someone else’s setting and stuff. I guess I’m insecure. I’m not sure. And I know I have the ability and…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
There’s proof of how long its been since I last talked to you! I didn’t know you’d abandoned your fanfic 🙂
Awesome! Let me know what you think!
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Oh, THAT thing? Practically abandoned. Although I may tinker with it occasionally… Right now I’m working on Aetherlight stuff.
Awesome! Thanks! I’ll read it pretty soon. 😉
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