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@whalekeeper

Could you tell?!! 😮😮 You’re spot on! He’s to scared to join them, so he convinces himself it just isn’t him. 😉 but yeah he really knows what he wants and is trying to avoid it.

@freedomwriter76

The blonde-haired man smirked. “Is that all you can take, Jew?” he sneered, rolling up his brown sleeves.

Leon leaned against the wall.

He wouldn’t give up so easily.

Leon pushed to his feet. “I’m never done.”

“I can do this all day” 😉

perhaps some resemblance?

I liked Leon’s section better in the first draft (the word ‘…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, it’s the cheapest school in my state too!! 😀

@keilah-h

IKR? I agree with like everything you said, except how does your mom think it’s lame? XD

Self love is my current favorite out of the soundtrack, but I like Mona Lisa too. what about you?

Oh yeah, spot holes is super eerie.

@freedomwriter76

I really like that idea! It kinda adds another layer to his dad, I would roll with it if I were you! (I mean if it works with the rest of the story)

Also I just visited a college where we live that has a design program, and it was really interesting! It’s a branch of a larger one out of town. It’s just in a normal business…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Hmmmmm…you’re really giving me something to think about XD

Lol something to think about was my intention, I hope you didn’t mind me randomly saying all that XD

The Bois’ father does have his moments of love, showing the old him that kinda faded after his first wife left, and it is POSSIBLE that he may have at least a semi-…

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@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76

Clement furrows his eyebrows.

“Conceal the casualty? Excuse me, what?” He stares at the young child wide eyed.

@freedomwriter76

I just realized something about your wip! (the one with the boi’s)

You can use some of this if you want, but don’t feel obligated.

In almost all of the writing I have read with the boi’s that relates to abuse, it tends to revolve around emotions of anger (for the oldest, right?) sometimes a sense of abandonment, and physical…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper

“And that isn’t just me trying to sound independent. I genuinely only mean to impress, oh… ninety percent of the time.”

Clement smirks. “To impress? So you stay with a group so you can have an audience?”

@freedomwriter76

Oh ok… I might have some ideas later!

@smiley @freedom

Oh yeah I need to know what the ships are too.

Are Bucky and Yelena just going to be like platonic friends, or are they so brainwashed that they simply see each-other as an ally? Or something else?

@smiley

That was so sad! I noticed I’ve started reading Pietro’s lines in his accent XD It’s kinda fun

@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper

“Can you believe him? Verbally attacking an innocent, sparkly-eyed child?”

Clement quirks an eyebrow at the odd statement.

who calls themselves sparkly eyed?

“You hardly look innocent.” Clement retorts, but not without a smile. He grins at the sight of Jakob, hardly able to contain his frustration.

“Oh my stars…[Read more]

Oh my goodness yes Peter!

@freedomwriter76

I love it! I really like how you changed each of their backstories to fit the au, but at the same time kept them with some of their canon stuff! Also Bucky and Yelena will be such an interesting combo, I can’t wait to see how you write them together!

@freedomwriter76

DUDE!! This is awesome! Who could ever have enough Marvel au’s?

Ok so… I see where this is going. Poor Steve is going to have a really rough time of it 🙁

@freedomwriter76

WELLL WELL WELL

I love dystopian, if it isn’t evident by my main wip, I would love to hear about it!

@whaley

Yeah 🤣 they are cute

@freedomwriter76

Aww poor Riker!

Man, he’s really going through it rn.

@lightoverdarkness6

Thanks girl! That means a lot to me that you like my style! <3

@acancello

Thank you!

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper

I’m going to dump some stuff from my current draft (mind the spelling, it’s unedited)

“This doesn’t look like a great place for some secret meeting.”

“It’s ok, these people don’t care.”

“So Lesli, what you said to Jonathan worked! He took me all the way to the professions district!” Lays…

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