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XD Verity fangirling is gonna be…something

meanwhile Corvina’s just gonna be like

Oh yay….more people… 🙄

@freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia OOF I’m getting major Corvina vibes from Viola as well!!! But I’m curious to see if they’re gonna clash or what cuz sometimes u never know…

Sometimes ppl with similar personalities clash and, especially being the same gender….this’ll be fun

@queen_of_alvastia

As far as edits go, it was confusing which character you were speaking for as the POV switches around. Are you writing omniscient view?

@queen_of_alvastia

Is he okay?

IS HE?!

I need to knoooow!!!!!!

@queen_of_alvastia

*Quiet voice in corner*

What just happened?

@queen_of_alvastia

Um, what just happened?! O.O

That was interesting, and it definitely had me hooked while reading it. I’ll have to think over any edits etc., but for now, that’s pretty good.

@freedomwriter76

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks, y’all! You’re really encouraging, and I’m glad you like it!

Yes, she is a bit hopeless, she knows deep in her heart that she’s headed for spiritual bankruptcy, but she’s seen so much already that she’s almost dead inside. It has a lot to do with the certain kind of things she’s involved in. Nasty, ugly…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Oooh this sounds so incredible first off!! You’ve already done AMAZING stuff so far!! Ugh 😭!

So, honestly it’s a little hard for me to actually give advice BUT I can say that I have a character very similar to this in my own series.

She’s not a mother, or “abusive” or even an adult for the first part of the series.…[Read more]

So, for tags! (Let’s see if I can remember them.) If I didn’t tag you, don’t feel like you can’t say anything, or if you know if someone who might like to help, then feel free to take them.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @joy-caroline @power @ANYBODY

Bruh I LUVVVVV TFR WRITING PROMPTS!!!! THEY CRACK ME UP!!!!!

Also I feel like that would be something Corvina would totally say

@freedomwriter76 thank u!!

@godlyfantasy12

You’re welcome! This is my favorite type of book research too, so thank you!

@koshka wow!! Thank you so much!!! That’s actually perfect and exactly how his scars are!! He does get pain actually from time to time and it directly correlates with pain that Corvina has in her hand sometimes.

Also, thank u for the info about his expressions and face muscles, didn’t even think about that! Also his sight…while his eye did escap…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Ooooooooooooooo! Like it is said above, this is ingenious!

Ok, so I will probably be on here a lot….

This picture, if it goes through, is actually of a chapel in the underground cities created by soldiers in the trenches in France during WWI.

@godlyfantasy12

Okkaaayyyy…*drags self back from hospital reports*

It looks like the wound is somewhat chronic, frozen in the stages just after bleeding, where the skin is sealed somewhat, but the wound is still open while no longer bleeding. which would make sense if it is painful from time to time. The magic would have to come in here as the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Eewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

I quote Viktor.

Did they just…

kiss?

*retches into trash can*

Just teasing. 😉 Although that was my reaction to the last little bit, especially the last sentence, there were a lot of reactions packed into that scene. It got rather tense.

And I love the dialogue! And that Ezra took the bullet for…[Read more]

This sounds really neat!!! Could u give an example??

Anymore advice is still appreciated tho! Even for future reference lol!!! Cuz there’s conflict in…welp…all over the place in this series lol

It’s rlly funny how just typing it out and working thru it can help sooo much lol