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Jaybird replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh, I just saw this and decided to investigate. XD (Now I really wish I checked my notifications more often. Lol) Sorry it took me so long. And I won’t be able to read through it until later today or tomorrow. 😢 Still, so excited!
Liberty’s Rangers story!!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
XD Me too.
I like science well enough. I really liked Geology and Radiology. (Lots of elements causing drama together.) Hence my choice of lecture. XD
I can think up ideas for the expirement… Identifying minerals by the color of their rubbings, whether they glow in the dark, how they break, how hard they are, and if they fiz when a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Awesome! What do I do with my outline now that it’s written? Do you want it submitted somewhere?
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Lol. Yeah…
XD If we get someone to twit him about the right thing, something would blow…
He’s usually a bit shy: a bit excited to meet people, but more than a bit uncomfortable with all the nuances he picks up on in situations. (Or thinks he does. Sepf-focused/self-conscious issues there) He’s used to getting picked on and…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Just opened this thread to read this:
“Well… I respect it because it’s a god, but I don’t have to like it. And it tries not to like me either because that would go against its morals. It doesn’t just talk, it preaches.”
😂 I have no words. Just goofy, suppressed laughter noises. XD Qhivzim sounds like my sister’s cat if they only l…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I am still sorely tempted to have my quiet guy haul off on someone. This is bad. His character development is at stake.
Viktor
“Any good? At science?” Viktor lifted one shoulder in a half shrug. “Ja, I guess so. I can remember things, I just…”
The pencil he had pulled back out waved aimlessly about as he searched for…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper Ehhhhh. Needlessss… *shudder* 😉 I hope it well well!
Wow. I just wrote an RP and it got completely out of hand. I haven’t had Viktor yelling at anyone in a while, but I just found a trigger. XD It’s a bit excessive for the moment though, so I’ll edit to what I was originally intending before I send it in.
His poor…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
And that is a question I had to scroll pretty far back to answer.
Do we wait for Hugo, @whakekeeper ?
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
AHa! That works… I lost my place too…
Now let’s see if I can get back into my charrie’s head.
Viktor
Lab partners. Right.
Viktor shuffled his notes into his textbook as slowly as he could, making sure each page was smooth and even. His old habit to duck his head out of friendships cut again. A quick glance at Lois didn’t help.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
*Gasp*
Wow. I like Lucille Barnes. The whole scene was beautiful to read, although I’d like to slap a few kids silly. The descriptions were clear and lovely.
Poor Lucille.
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Aw, Lucille… I like Lucille.
I think I like her dad. Is he Dali?
I also found her description of her hair fascinating. Is it just metaphor, or does it have an important part in the plot/worldbuilding?
Those other kids are bullies. 😠 The struggle of wills in the fight was really good though. I liked how you focus on her not throwi…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Oh gracious. I want to read both of these so much. XD
Maybe the ink one. Maybe. But then, the cat…
Which are you most excited about?
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Koshka replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Seriously got an attitude that might cover some seriousness.
Ohh, have fun!
I’ll probably not get to the chapters till Sunday, as today is a “clean half the campus” day between camps.
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Koshka replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Ooooooooo…
*Reads quotes*
*Stares at pictures*
*Nods to self*
Another poor kid, though this one has a serious attitude. Probably a rebel of some sort. Nice.
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Signing in for the long haul. I can look for rogue grammar and suspicious word choices.
Code key: nuanced syntax.
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Agreed. We could let it move at whatever pace it can without needing to flip back 392764683 pages.
Yes! I haven’t had time to open it up yet (word is on the computer) but I’m hoping to in the next hour (we got an extended lunch break today!!!!).
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
I could let him meet the mid-arc Leoron.
*Brain glitches*
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Yes!!
Maybe we should throw them together in an RP…but I don’t really have time right now for a real one. *Gazes forlornly at the Fantasy School*
Maybe in an email thread. That way we don’t have to work with a school system or wander a Castle.
Hmm. If we both have time (which is a very big if). Otherwise they can just hear…[Read more]
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