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@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @wilfer-w OOH BTW!! I figure after this maybe we can go ahead and start a meeting??? Up to y’all 😊

@koshka UGH poor EIRA!!

so maybe since this is still fantasy, it’s still like in ur normal series, so when her brother finds her and she begins to gain truth again, her body begins to heal?

@freedomwriter76

gasp! I just realized this is kinda cool/cute which Jocelyn and Angelina kinda being friends and Angelina and now Nyx and Riker talking, and neither of them want to talk about it either!!

so In this AU, Nyx went thru some physical abuse things and such, from both his uncle and another person (who will be mentioned as the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 k!

Nyx

“Ugh why’s the water here so blasted cold?” Nyx hissed, turning off the faucet and reaching for the automated paper dispenser on the wall.

His nose twitched in agitation as he dried his now freezing hands and then chunked the paper into a nearby waste bin.

Placing his hands in his pockets, he sighed, leaning again…[Read more]

Wow. Look what happens when I step off for a day. These were really fun to read through!

@godlyfantasy12

Eira is an Alve, although she has Forester blood too. Without an idea of who she is, she has been raised in an orphanage that doesn’t believe the Light exists, and that the Alven are mere fairy tales. She is taught first of all the Light, t…

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@theloonyone

That’s how I know I’m onto things… 🤐🤐

Yeah… 🤨

@freedomwriter76 hey can Riker run into one of my charries in the bathroom? I was just thinking it’d be funny if Nyx is in there and he’s like “Whoa. You look like crap.”

XD

@freedomwriter76 😭 RIKEEERRR ADOLPHUS U BEST WATCH OUT! @elishavet-pidyon @koshka

Paxton

Paxton glanced at Wolfgang, who was smiling softly, and then at Leo, who gave a small nod.

He looked down at his backpack, and then slowly slid it back over his shoulder, nodding himself.

He glanced over his shoulder, trying to figure out how exactly he…[Read more]

@theloonyone

Um… good for you? 🤨😂

Yeah… 🤨

Ooh… these friends… 😬

Yeah… 🤨

I loved the chapter! And I don’t like those friends 😒 But I love Lesli and Tauren! I’ve got mixed feelings about Keiryn

LOL exactly how I wanted you guys to feel 🤣.

😍 Tauren’s here!! maybe 🙂

Yeah…🤨

(Yeah…🤨 is my new way of saying HMMMM 🤐&#x…

@arien

LOL that was really cute 😂

A buffalo buffing really does seem like something a kid would come up with. And tbh the dialogue was really good for 8 or 9 years old. I don’t even know if I knew what a council was at 8 🤣

@arien

Lol yes! My story is partially inspired by the city of ember. LOVE LOVE LOVED that book growing up. I didn’t actually realize the parallels until quite awhile through plotting 😅

Good job!

Thanks!😁

HEHE I wonder what Keiryn was doing in the mines? 🤨

Go on, Lesli, just give him a big hug in front of everyone, they don’t matter! 😊😍

Lol y…[Read more]

@loopylin

Sure! Do whatever you need to. I’d just like Everly and Kaine to stick to together.

@starofthenorth

No worries, thanks for reading!

So sorry it took me so long to reply! I LOVE it!! Great job!

And I like your drawing style, too.

Thank you! Glad you like it! 😁

@lightoverdarkness6

LOL Mount Everest XDXD

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w

Winton

He set a box of plastic cutlery beside the space where the pizza would go. The fruit and vegetable tray was in the little fridge in the corner of his office. Everything was basically ready.

Chairs for the club members were set around a long table in the center of the room. The…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

@freedomwriter76

Sounds good to me! We will be having dinner soon, however, and church soon after that. (There’s a missionary friend of our family coming ; I’m sooo excited!)

So, I’ll go ahead and do a little one of Winton preparing for it.

@freedomwriter76

That’s a good part too. I did say it was ONE of my favorites…

I just like blowing stuff up. *Face palm* XD

But the one to one conversations are priceless!

Also, in that last one, I love the mildly creepy way you described Felix. *Shudder* 🙂

@freedomwriter76

I love all the brothers (not the step brothers) soooo much!

That was really good! Can’t wait to read more 😁

Also, she’s not there actual mom is she… I was going to ask at the beginning if they were adopted.

@freedomwriter76

Ah, perfect! That was such a pleasure to read. I love these characters!

And their dynamic and descriptions are superb! I love seeing them interact.

The whole thing was really good, especially for a first draft. One of my favorites is the opening, but I have a soft spot for guerrilla warfare and resistance groups (should I have…[Read more]

@keilah-h oh bruh I also luv me some stuffies and pretty sure I’m the oldest in the RP XD