Pen_for_Christ205

Hey y’all, I and my sister will be on off and on for the next couple of days (especially tomorrow), so that could potentially add 2 to your numbers.

@esther-c

Huh, I’ve never really thought of it that way before, but I think that’s the aspect of their relationship that I play off of in the second book to create more conflict. Man, I am going to be pondering over this all day. XD

XD glad I could make you think! It might be a good source of conflict for book 2, but I think it would be great if…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’m still not getting notified when you tag me 😭

anyways they looks super cute together!

@loopylin

Wow those hands look amazing!!

@savannah_grace2009

1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.

Nope! Super intriguing!

2. Is Sef relatable? Can you really feel her and does she become real in your mind?

Very relatable!

3. Was there anywhere that you were confused?

At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make so…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thanks for giving specific question, it really helps!

Answering as if I’ve never heard your writing before XD

1. Were you drawn into the story right away?

I was confused as to why the story had so much action before a exposition. It felt like information overload on many things, and I couldn’t tell what was important. Should, I think…[Read more]

@acancello

Woah!! I’m so proud of you!! Good luck on your edits! 💖💖🎉🎉

@acancello

Wait, what’s this about you writing your epilogue?! Did you finish something big?

@esther-c

Thank you so much Esther! I’ve been doubting my writing recently and really comparing myself to others, so it makes me happy you like it. I started writing in present tense as soon as I started writing, so after the initial hurdle (it was hard lol, I kept using said) it’s been pretty natural, because I don’t know how write any other…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @hybridlore @loopylin @whalekeeper

Ok this is kinda long, if it looks familiar it’s a complete redo of a scene I posted awhile ago 🙂

I’m at exactly 24k now… progress is slow but going alright.

For those of you who don’t know, Aleshia is Lesli’s new boss but also the mother of her best friend, Tauren, so she grew up…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’ll show you if I ever finish it lol!

Wow, 35 pages? You go girl!!

Also, love the scene. Erich is really interesting…

Btw I’m not getting notifs for anything you tag me in 🙄 if there’s something you want me to see and you think I missed it feel free to let me know in a update!

@smiley

Oh thank you soooo much 😭😭 I’m so glad it’s not the ross I like

@loopylin

Oh wow, you parents being grandparents is weird O_O

Nicknames is great, I need to listen to it again, so glad you like it! Oh, I like run the world too.

I’ll have to check that one out, I haven’t listened to much TOP other than their really big hits.

Yeah! Totally recommend it, along with a big dose of caution. BTS is a pretty safe…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I know, I know XD I want to write, and I have an idea for a scene I want to write today for Leon/Riker’s 3rd book🤫

Oh, really?! Cool! Tag me if you post it pls! Also, I haven’t been getting notifs for some of your posts, so if I don’t respond that might be it. 🙁

Thanks! XD

Oh, yes, draw bucky! I’m currently working on a Mav…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Jayson

This was awkward.

“Jayson, Rafael, which would you two prefer?” the older man turned to Raffe with a gentle smile. I glanced at my Commando In Arms (I’ll explain later, it has to do with cereal boxes).

“Well,” Raffe paused as if tasting his thoughts before serving them for general consumption. “I think you’r…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Do you want to start us off? @Freedomwriter76 has a copy of where we last left off on the previous page 🙂

Also, we can start a new plot if you guys want, I know we have who is it… Acheron? as the current antagonist? He can continue being bad or we can make something new happen 😂

@savannah_grace2009

@loopylin

Woah, he has his own family??! That would be crazy. My sister doesn’t want kids though 😂

Oh my goodness wait you’re a aunt?! 😳

Oh, those are great! I had a friend recommend half alive, TOP, and dayglow to me awhile back, I listen to them occasionally. Do you have a favorite song? My favorite from dayglow is nicknames, can I call…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

HIIII!!!

I saw your post, sorry about your grandmom! I never know how to console people on things like that because my life view is kinda bland and seems emotionless, I just figure God takes people when he wants too, but I know it must be scary. I never knew my grandmom well before she became elderly, so my connection with her…[Read more]

@looplylin

XD my mom had me at like 42. My sister is twenty, super hard to believe lol.

Oh, yeah! I’ve seen other people do scribble type drafts, to pick a composition.

Nice! What kind of music do you like?

You use earbuds? I have wireless earbuds I use for when I can’t be bothered with a wire (like if I’m curling my hair or something) but…[Read more]

@looplyin

yeah, I thought I’d hate it but I’m honestly really glad it happened lol. We lived around eachother so much it was kinda hard to become our own unique people. I’m still super glad to see her again though! And yeah, i only have one

Great lol… I’m not sure. It’s my main wip, so that’s why it seems like I’m moving forwards, I don’t…[Read more]