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@esther-c WHOOPS totally forgot to respond to this 🤣 hmmm idk what could be on the other side…

Would Aloth have anything interesting in mind? 😂 or nah

“Till death do us part.” 

Sickness. Dearth too soon. Closing with another promise. 

“I’ll keep her safe, I promise i’ll keep our baby safe.” 

Intruders. Cornered by soldiers. Gunshot killing my sunshine. 

“No, please not again.” 

Pain. Crushed by guilt. Anger coursing through my veins. 

“You’ll pay. You’ll pay for all that you’ve done.…[Read more]

@katthewriter aww poor girl!!! 😭

Also, (I’ll reply to all yall in just a sec) here’s the graphic/aesthetic of each of the MC’s and a lil kinda about them snippet.

Who was I? Was I anyone before? All I had were foggy memories of white walls and pain, and some sinister feeling that I was missing something. Did I have a family before being in this camp? Was I somebody? Or am I…[Read more]

@gold_hummingbird AHHHH HIIII!! It’s me V.L!!

@mineralizedwritings is Lesli Mintz. So good to see ya here!!!

also yes be prepared to answer a ton of questions as u introduce yourself to KP, our Keepers tend to get a bit carried away when meeting someone new (we’re an excitable bunch XD)

Really there’s not much to learn, this place is he…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka AUGH RIKER 😭 AND LEEEEO AND DIETRICH AND ADOLPHUS UGH! I think I’m going to have Ara strike up a conversation with those two…

Arabella

Ara nodded with a small smile at Leo’s silent thanks, then waited on the reply from Felix. He huffed, nodding. His eyes landed on Ara and Ellie.

“Will you be joining us?”

“…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 UNDERSTANDABLE!!!

I write in past tense tho but I find myself sometimes switching tenses out of the blue and it’s just…AGH

Bruh wait a min Hans and Erich is alone with Vulk rofl that must be awkward

@freedomwriter76 @koshka

@koshka

heh heh…yea this is a decision he makes in the series as well.

In Corvina’s defense she also only gives him this decision because she too is trying to protect him in her own way.

@godlyfantasy12

Wait, November, WHAT? NOO! What does she want you to do?

What did you just decide to do?!

@charityanne

Haha! This is definitely a cat. (I just read this with my cat walking over my lap to sit on the desk and stare at me.)

Where do your poem lines end in each stanza?

@koshka ZLATAN 😭 @freedomwriter76

November

Caned? Celled?

As in…beaten…?

But…but why…?

November’s heart lurched, stomach twisting. He was already nauseous…

He grunted, gripping his stomach. Nope. No. He was not about to get sick on top of everything else going on…

Tear-streaked eyes met Zlatan’s. “W-Why…?” He choked out.

Zlatan’s gaze sof…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

AHHHHH!!!! LEO AND TALIA!! That scene was sooo…..I love y’all’s charies.

Zlatan

Voices. Zlatan tensed, one hand sliding to his sword hilt. He was on the floor with his shoulder leaning against something hard. How…?

“…waking up.”

He blinked, eyes adjusting to the flickering torchlight. Glimmering stone…[Read more]

@katthewriter what who would tell you that?! This is a community of support and encouragement!!! That is very rude. Doesn’t matter how much work your writing needs if you don’t have anything good to say or can’t say it in a way where it is a critique or comes off as helpful don’t say it!

ahem, rant over.

as for me, it immediately grabbed…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 AGH THEY ARE SOOOO CUTE!!!

Arabella

Ara gave a small wave to little girl, watching as she slowly pulled her head out from her father’s grip.

“Hi…Bella…”

Ara watched as the little girls face morphed before her eyes into the little white haired boy she now called brother.

She smiled.

“I like your friend,” Ara said softly,…[Read more]