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@esther are you doing it on a phone? It might not work the same.  But we will be working on it,  I’ll let Kathleen know asap (I’m on staff too)

Thanks for letting us know!

@elishavet-pidyon ur good!!! Imma RP (and u can RP again if ur still on 😊)

Grimm

Grimm gently held November’s shoulders, letting the ginger lean against him. November glanced at him, brows furrowing. His eyes then looked over at Riker, face paling.

“Riker…I…” He shifted. Winced.

“Easy, just stay here for now, alright? Take it easy…” Grim…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 that was great, though I’m not entirely sure how to help you… XD

Poor Anwyn 😭

I will say one thing…I was definitely confused with the whole Rock and light thing (like I know we’re supposed to be confused but I mean I couldn’t exactly “see” what was happening if that makes sense 😊) so yea

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter

Lo and behold, I hath ariveth! From whence I came I canna tell an to where I go tha na cratur canna…

Ok, I don’t know how the Florid Sword turned into Donal Grant, but the point is that I am here for the moment, and I offer my apologies for my absence.

(Note: HAVE ANY OF Y’ALL READ SIR GIBBIE BY GEORGE…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

IKR? SO COOL! XD I want to see the short story checklist, idk why I can’t click it, I suppose it’s because it hasn’t launched yet?

@princesachronicle22

The first part was good! I don’t really read stuff that goes into that much detail about peoples torment XD So I stopped reading, but I’m sure it was great. Love your writing style btw!

@Thearcaneaxiom

Thanks! And thanks for the feedback 😀:)

@princesachronicle22

Thanks!!

Now y’all probably wanna know what happened XD

@princesachronicle22 AWW SERIN 😭 honestly she makes me think of Paxton except because of the abuse he went through he became scared, shy, etc. Serin has become tough, cold, etc.

But Pax has been thru a lot too. He actually broke an arm once because…well…

Yea…

He was blamed for it though… “clumsiness”

@thearcaneaxiom @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @felicity

I’ve been thinking about the order of my books, how would this sound for titles?

Afterthoughts of Hate

Afterthoughts of a Releaser

Afterthoughts of The Left Behind

(Haven’t come up with a good title for the fourth yet…)

Honest opinions? Does it…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 AWWW JUST READ IT I LUV HIM SO MUCH!!! @thearcaneaxiom I’d love to have Corvina join that group btw!

@princesachronicle22 OH I must’ve missed it sorry!!!

@freedomwriter76 thx!! I can make another RP I thought it started earlier then it does XD

Lucien

Lucien whistled. Things were getting…heated.

Caden lifted Benji into his arms. The boy wrapped his arms around the blonde, frowning.

“Why’s everyone angry?”

“Shh…it’s alright, bud. Just…a lot of emotions going around…” Caden swallowed, looking…[Read more]

@acancello

Nice! I would say it’s better, but the restaurant scene could have worked with some changes too.

I staggered over to an almond tree that was bent into the shape of a seat that was covered in moss and fallen flower petals and sunk down on it breathing hard.

I would make that sentence separated into two, it’s a little long.

@freedomwriter76 ok so I’ll be in a concert tonight for who knows how long lol!!!

u can RP for Puck’s group and if u want to get Buck and Puck (heh XD) separated from the other group u can and then we can RP more tomorrow 😊

@freedomwriter76 GASP YESSS PLOTTING ELIAS!!!!

@freedomwriter76

Puck

Lucien raised a brow, slowly lowering his bow. He slipped it back on his back, and the arrow back in its place.

“Tony? Well, nice to meet ya.”

Caden smiled, “Yea! The more company the better!”

Puck let out a long, loud sigh/groan, obviously thinking the opposite. Caden offered him a sympathetic smile, rubbing his shoulde…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Aram

Aram narrowed his eyes.

There was definitely something this girl was not telling him.

And he knew quite a bit about being deceptive. Most of his young life had been filled with deceit.

“A weapon? A sword?” He quirked a brow.

“Mm…not exactly…” Nadya sighed.

Aram nodded. “This…weapon…you say it was stolen?”

“Yes,”…[Read more]

AND TONYYYYYY!!! AHHHHHHHH