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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 hours, 42 minutes ago
Yay! It worked. I realize now that the last bit was a touch scrambled. It should read like this:
The little boy Laiba was carrying struggled to get down. The moment his feet touched the tent floor he trundled off to join his siblings. Laiba smiled faintly.
“They are precious.” Alyona whispered politely, her heart twisting inside her. The girl…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 hours, 50 minutes ago
And a bit from Book 2!
“Welcome, husband.” The woman by the fire stood up. She was beautiful in her own way. Her eyes were a honey gold and glowed with a quiet excitement. The hair that she brushed back under her hood was dark as night. Alyona thought she might be a few years younger than Clehan. A small child was perched on her hip, his head res…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 hours, 51 minutes ago
I am too suspicious about this connection to try to open another thread to do this… I think this is the right spot though.
@godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @ellette-giselle @loopylin @anyone-who-wants
I have picked up writing in my WIP a bit more the past week, although it’s a bit out of chronological order. I just…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 hours, 58 minutes ago
I made it! I’ve been trying to get on all day. Had it “opening” during work which was slow today.
But I have made it. *gasp for breath*
Koshka and I are working on homework, so we’ll be on and off… As much as Wyoh lets us in.
*glares at Wyoh*
Be nice! I wrote some scenes I want to share for critiques.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 hours, 51 minutes ago
Feel lik im doing a mic check CHECK 1…2…3!! XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 hours, 52 minutes ago
Hey! Is anyone on? @keilah-h @loopylin @whalekeeper @esther-c @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freed_and_redeemed @anyone-else XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 15 hours, 5 minutes ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @loopylin
Oh goodness. XD
Sypher
The white faced woman stood at the front of the room. Syph slowly followed suit. Guppies, but those shadowed eyes were unnerving. He dropped the pearly water twist he’d been fidgeting with. It dissolved into air before it reached the ground.
Outside? Back into the sunshine and fresh air?…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 10 hours ago
*blink*
That was weird.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 10 hours ago
Flipping through the pages of this RP feeling rather like a spy as I try to hunt down my errant water sprite.
Not sure where he is rn.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 10 hours ago
Flipping through the pages of this RP feeling rather like a spy as I try to hunt down my errant water sprite. As if I don’t have an essay to write, ect.
Not sure where he is rn. Not sure where I left him.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 13 hours ago
Leo
Hmm. True freedom.
Leo waited for Rory to catch up, mind whirring. He took a breath to answer, then paused, looking for the right words. Slowly, carefully, he tried to explain.
“There are different kinds of Freedom. The political kind usually means liberty to pursue your own dreams and live your life, even make your own…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 14 hours ago
Poor kid. He’d probably think sidewalk chalk was a crime
Leo
“Agents?” Leo looked up from the tile. Rory was watching him with large, confused eyes.
“Eh, no. Not what you call Agents. There were–are–plenty of special ops soldiers in the army, but they weren’t murderers and kidnappers like your Agents. They were just…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 day, 14 hours ago
Ok. I sympathize.
I do not have a stutter, but I get seriously caught on words and/or forget the word I was about to say right as it’s ready to leave my mouth. Then I’m awkwardly staring at the person I was talking to while doing mental gymnastics. Or I just repeat scrambled phrases until the right one comes out. It’s gotten worse the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Scrivener Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 15 hours ago
Awesome sauce. Please do tell me how it works for you. I’ll take any info about these questions at this point. 🙂
(Completely understand. I’m ok with tech, but one moment of brilliant logic will be balanced with blankly staring at the screen wondering how a string of 1’s and 0’s could make something so confusing.)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 17 hours ago
*Leo nods in concern*
*Silvia appears and gives you a hug* “Welcome to the team! You’re… Salamander.”
*Leo rolls his eyes*
Leo
“Desecrated government property? My neighborhood wasn’t a… high class place. I don’t even know how we got sidewalks. Probably one of those ‘city improvement’ plans where they make nonsense jobs…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic What were your first written stories about? in the forum Topic of the Week 2 days, 9 hours ago
The first story I remember writing…
Well, a long time ago… I mostly just started a bunch of random stories with phrases like “There once was a little girl who was very, very, ugly” or “Charlotte was a cat who didn’t like mice” (I liked the name Charlotte for no explainable reason) and then left them at a few sentences long and forgot about…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 10 hours ago
Apparently. Maybe I should find one and try it. XD
Glad that’s an “almost choked”. Lol
Hmmm, enough fruit for a Ridgerunner if ever there was enough. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 18 hours ago
That’s the stuff, Hugo! Hot chocolate saves the day every time.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 days, 18 hours ago
Credit goes to Meadow Rose, an artist I like to find on line when I need a smile or art inspiration.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 days, 18 hours ago
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