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Active 9 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@jess @jane-maree I shall join you in this quest.
@daeus @kate-flournoy Are you in tonight? -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@GracieGirl ah okay! See you in the future.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-snapper I still can’t get over all the ice cream references. XD
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Jess @GracieGirl I come to join you. 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
All of you are choosing favorite lines but I can’t seem to find any of my own. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Wow. Everyone…I don’t know what to say…Just…just…here *hands out ice cream* Thank you!!!!
@graciegirl Yay! I’m so glad you liked it! *salutes you back* What was your favorite line?
@daeus It is the bestistest place on the internet, after all! 😀 And I love that line too. I tried to incorporate your ice cream and scones and raspberries.…[Read more] -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus Sure thing! *goes to do that*
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Daeus replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 5 months ago
@jane-maree Oooh, dump away. Also, if you wouldn’t mind asking them to share it, that would be great.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus (@watersnail) I too am an OYANer, so I can dump it on peoples there.
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Jane Maree posted an update 9 years, 5 months ago
@watersnail WAITWAITWAIT. I hear that you are an OYANer. *flails* HI. IT IS I. THE PIZZA NINJA AUSSIE FROM THE OYAN FORUM.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-snapper OH MY GOODNESS. This made me laugh so hard. King Daeus though. +975 points for this. XD
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Daeus replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 5 months ago
@sierra-r Alas! I applied for the Facebook group, but never got accepted. Don’t know why.
@audrey-caylin I thought about them, but I wasn’t sure about their no self promotion policy. I’m not selling anything, but it is my own thing and it is for my own use and for KPs. Thoughts?
@adry_grace No problem. Wow, you actually do Wattpad? I am an…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@anne-swiftblade that was definitely a close second.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Help with a Story Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@delightinlife This is a tough sort of situation. My suggestion would be to try a few different options to shake it up a bit and see what you like. These are some things that I’ve done:
1: tell the story from a completely different Point of View.
2: Change the genre. (I’ve legit done this to a novel. It started out as Medieval, and I switched it…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
My favorite line(s), though there were SO MANY GREAT ONES:
Kate stopped outside of the large doors to the war room. Why was it that there was always some sort of hidden force that held people’s hands back from knocking? Her fist was stuck midair, and she thought back to every book she had read before. Great. Now she was living a cliché.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper I’ve been waiting my entire KP life for someone to do something like this. *bestows Elven blessings upon you* SO. FUNNY. Why does it hurt so much?!
Wait, if @Daeus is King, and @Emma-Flournoy is princess, does that make Emma Daeus’s daughter? XD
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Daeus replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 5 months ago
Here, let me lift some weight myself. Social media, of course, is a good avenue. You can use these links to share the survey.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Ok, this was my favorite line: 😛
“Don’t think what, that they sat and had tea? No, I don’t think that. They’re probably eating scones with chocolate and having the time of their lives…without me.”
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Daeus replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 5 months ago
Hey, friends, see if you can help me brainstorm for a bit.
So far, about fifty people have taken the reader behavior survey. That’s pretty awesome. Fifty people can show us some neat things about reader behavior, but we’re going to need a lot more need more if we’re hoping for reliable and detailed data.
So maybe my outlook was too limited.…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper I have literally been laughing so hard I can barely read this. HILARIOUS DOES NOT DO IT JUSTICE. Owwwww… *wipes eyes* I love this too much. Excellent job with the characterization, though you made me out much braver than I’ll ever be. *splits face grinning**wipes eyes again*
Oh man… this is perfect. - Load More

YES I AM HELLO. I am WaterSnail on OYAN as well as here so yeeah. (I’m sorry, I haven’t been very active in either of these forums lately at all. :/) But yes! Hello there fellow OYANer!!!!