Mallory O'Bier

@GracieGirl NO! MINE. *snatches and glares*

XD Okay… I guess… *reluctantly gives her to you* Take care of her though… and if she acts weird on and off, don’t worry, because for me she’s a villain. :’D

@GracieGirl ah, yes. Homeschooling, as wonderful as it is, can definitely be stressful at times. I’ll be praying. 🙂

The nose too. If you’re brave enough to snarl at yourself in a mirror, notice how the nose humps in the middle and wrinkles at the bridge.

@Alia *chokes* Erm… haha… XD Well, don’t be afraid to draw it crooked and off center. Sometimes the impression is more important than accuracy. Also don’t overdraw the mouth— a few well-placed lines are better than the whole outline, which can sometimes look static and lifeless. As for snarls in particular… quick hint. More than half of a…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 she could approach Matthias about it… but it would be better, I think, if you did end up having the sparring scene, and as she’s walking in she overhears something, and then tries to get the info out of him while they’re sparring. His continued avoidance will only heighten her curiosity, giving you a great opportunity to get…[Read more]

I just realized I butchered that title. You know you’re a pathetic creature when you can’t even remember the title of your own blog post that you just looked at five minutes ago. XD

@Alia *nods* Yeah, I’ve read that, it was pretty good. XD

@That_writer_girl_99 But deep down inside, aren’t we all just a little afraid of Kate’s dragon breathe?

*rushes in late* Story? What story? OH, that story. Ahem. Yes. Here you go. @Daeus @That_writer_girl_99 And I’ll tag @Kate-Flournoy just in case.

That Time I Thought God Couldn’t Write a Story

@stewie-plotter I’d be down for that.

Welcome to the site, @lady_erin! Glad you found us. 🙂 Are you working on any stories at the moment? If so, what’s the premise?

Welcome to the site, @lady-erin! Glad you found us. 🙂 Are you working on any stories at the moment? If so, what’s the premise?

@That_Writer_Girl_99 okay. That’s fine. It’s good to know your limits. We don’t want you burning out. 😉

Wellll… since you want to stick to Kara’s pov, maybe she could overhear some guards talking about what happened? Or perhaps she hears Matthias talking to a guard, receiving or giving a message from/to the Warden. This gives her suspicions…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 again, my apologies… *clears throat meekly* Telepathic dragon in the making here; I was practicing and got it wrong. *mysterious wink*

Moving on now.

No, you’re right. That’s not enough to drive an entire chapter. Unless something important happens in the sparring room, I would say cut it entirely. Writing is about change,…[Read more]

@that_writer_girl_99 Oops. I’ve already left.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 My apologies. That’s what would have gotten me stuck. XD
*ahem* How are you stuck?

@That_Writer_Girl_99 switch POVs.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 I’ll give him a shot. 🙂

@Ethryndal King @Daeus has spoken…

@audrey-caylin @jess @dragon-snapper @winter-rose @graciegirl @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @jane-maree Anyone with me tonight?

@ethryndal! Story!