Orielle2023

@lightoverdarkness6

Yes! Awwww. Yeah I don’t think he would love that 🤣🤣. In some ways I can’t wait for my brothers to turn 14, so they can mature a little😂. But also I want them to stay little forever 😩❤️.

Yeah I get that!

Wow!!! Thank you all so much for the tips and ideas!!! As soon as y’all started sharing ideas, my brain was just like gushi…

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@keilah-h @loopylin @theloonyone @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c

Tauren

Tauren looks up at a grand ceiling, arching above him in many different directions.

Where am I?

He slowly raises to a sitting position, taking in the beautiful architecture around him.

Woah… this place is amazing.

He stands up, brushing himself off, before turning to a…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

That sounds cute!

@Arien

Woah yall.. 8 books? oh my XD

And thanks! I can’t wait to show you all how it unravels too, even though that’s in the ending of my series.

@esther-c

Ah yeah! I wright from every pov and I forget that other people don’t do that 😂

oops lol.

@esther-c

Oh nice! I liked it!

I think it would have been cool to have some inner dialogue about how the dad felt about stealing the bus! I haven’t connected with him as a character yet, and I thin some inner dialogue would really help. I like that it seems like Ev’s dad is going to get redemption! Idk where you’re taking it, but I think it’s…[Read more]

@erica

Oh love your charrie pics!

@arien

Especially love that pic of Aedan lol

@sarafini @esther-c @whalekeeper @annabethkatherinewingfeather @anyone else I’m forgetting

I agree that On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness isn’t as great as the others. I think Andrew Peterson had some good ideas, but he hadn’t worked much on his writing yet. And I do not like the type of “humor” that occurs in especially the first th…[Read more]

@wilder-w

Yeah, I know God is in control, but I struggle a lot with that.

I struggle with the same thing. It’s easy to say “God is in control!” but it’s so, so much harder to believe it.

@arien

(And wow, everything you say about Layson–seriously, he draws an animal guide to make Tauren think a snake is a frog? LOL–reminds me of this guy I know whose name is really similar, so I keep picturing the guy I know happens to be my sister’s crush sorry

Hey now.

Yeah.

@godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6

I hav…[Read more]

@koshka @sarafini @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @godlyfantasy12

Thanks for all your suggestions! I will most likely use one of them but I haven’t had the time to think through them all yet 😊

I never really thought about using Latin names before, but it seems that’s what a lot of you guys do! Latin is great.

@lightoverdarkness6

Thanks!! “Briana” is actually some actress (it just said “actress Becky G.” lol) but I thought she really had Briana’s face!

Lol, it wasn’t actually that long, it just felt like it.

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @mineralizedwritings @arien @whoeverelseiforgot

So I have a romantic subplot in my WIP and I love it lol . . . 😍🤣

Christopher and Briana have an interesting relationship. When they are fifteenish (they haven’t met each other yet) their fathers sort of arrange for them to eventually get married.…[Read more]

I have a couple others I might post later.

Elena (I don’t know if I’ve mentioned her yet, she’s Christopher’s nine-year-old sister and super adorable!!)

And this is Briana.

@felicity @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

I have pictures of my characters . . . let’s see if I can figure this out . . .j

Aha! Got it! This is Christopher.

@arien

Oh idk… try right clicking the picture and clicking copy, and then use control v to post it in the kp text box?

@godlyfatasy12

Oh and I do have a scene like that

When Lesli is meeting Everly for the first time (already awkward because they hardly see other pople, much less somebody there age) Tauern comes running out saying he saw a frog (snake) in a tree, he’s going to poke it to see if it jumps, and wants to know if Lesli wants to watch, and then he…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

MY THIRD TIME WRITING THIS KP STOP EATING THEMMMM

my post gets shorter every time because I have to re-wright it sorry lol…

I would love to know what Nyx would look like as a human…. if he does shapeshift. And I don’t think there is anything odd about it. It’s a bit different with a romance, but as long as they have a human…[Read more]