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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
This is something that I pay pretty close attention to, so I feel like I have a little bit more of a range.
With hair color I have a fairly even split between red, brown, blonde, white, and black, even some blue, so I think I’m good there lol.
With eye color I have even more of a range. I’ve gone with green, blue, hazel, amber, gray, purple,…[Read more]
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hybridlore started the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
So this was an interesting idea I had yesterday… I was wondering which traits are most commonly picked for character appearances (and personality, too).
For example, even though my hair is more of a dirty blonde, most of my main characters have dark brown or black hair, and gray or brown eyes. I’m not really sure why I do this XD I guess I just…[Read more] -
hybridlore replied to the topic Anyone want to critique my plot? in the forum Plotting 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, I get it now! It’s simply the power of resistance and the fact that none of the other Paynes know that they’re being lied to. So Sef will have to confront her lies in a more obvious way than most books.
That makes sense! And yeah, definitely don’t feel like you have to take any of my advice… It’s totally up to you…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 9 months ago
@vinagirl (Thanks @rae for the tag XD I was super confused until I figured out why you had tagged me separately lol.)
Hi! I’m also a homeschooled Christian girl and oldest child! (Yay! XD) I go by Hybrid on here, and I write science fiction and sometimes dystopian.
It looks like you already got asked a ton of questions, and it’s getting late, so…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Anyone want to critique my plot? in the forum Plotting 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh, wow XD I didn’t even realize it had been so long since this was posted. Sorry, I don’t know why I didn’t see it before, I know you didn’t tag me but I check the recent topics fairly often. I totally get that, but I think in future editing it might make more sense to cut the opening chapters. But it’s totally up to you…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Anyone want to critique my plot? in the forum Plotting 2 years, 9 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Anyone want to critique my plot? in the forum Plotting 2 years, 9 months ago
Great job on the outline! I know it’s hard XD I’ve tried to outline my stories before, but tbh I never really got a complete outline.
I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s…[Read more]
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hybridlore posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @acancello @highscribeofaetherium @anyoneelse Hi! I was wondering if any of you do classical conversations? We’re thinking about doing it for next semester. If so, do you like it?
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Marcel
“Why sit in a corner?” Marcel raised an eyebrow, not unkindly. “A difference like that wouldn’t stop my friends from hanging with me, and I’m a soggy mess.”
He vaguely wondered what religion Chase was alluding to.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Thx girl ❤
Also, I’m sorry he seems a little distant when saying or reacting to things. He has thoughts, but doesn’t react strongly with emotions unless it hits a nerve.
Marcel
“I’ll take that as a compliment or a gift.” Somehow, that remark gave Marcel déjà vu. He swallowed the slime in his throat from the transformation, and went back t…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Marcel
Marcel’s voice was so quiet, it could have belonged on a tape. “Maybe you should try… thinking about something else?”
Before Chase could retort, the young Guardian raised his hands defensively. “Look. Watch.”
He honestly couldn’t remember the last time he had talked so much about himself, or someone else. His face was flushed from…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Newsletter question? in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 9 months ago
Aw, that’s so cute!! XD
I love how you give it a hanger ending, and implied stuff like that in their world is normal XD
And I was concerned Oliver was actually drowned, so… *phew* No, he’s fine and everybody’s fine.
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Enid replied to the topic Newsletter question? in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 9 months ago
Okay! XD I’ll have to finish it first. And yeah, it was luck for me too, I clicked on your topics page on accident and saw this.
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Enid replied to the topic Newsletter question? in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 9 months ago
Hey, I know this was a long time ago, but I actually started a short story for the same picture prompt! If you want, and since nothing is posted on the official website so far, we could compare them for fun.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Marcel
Chase trembled slightly, eyes blood red.
Marcel didn’t even blink. He fingered a bead bracelet on his arm, thoughtful. “You think about that… a lot.”
It was a statement, not a question.
Babs
Babs swallowed the last of her burger, and brushed the crumbs off her skirt. “…Thanks. Um, I’ll join PE with you. If I don’t fin…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
*Ahem* I’m here
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Lol 🤪 You’re lucky, I almost never dream about any of my own characters.
Marcel
“I won’t.” This world, whatever it consisted of, was safe. Marcel was sure of that, but if Chase was afraid, it wasn’t right to dismiss his fear. “I get attacked by demons occasionally. So I get it.”
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Enid replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
*Subscribes*
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I have heard of it, but I dont think we ever did it. Sorry I couldn’t be more of a help 🙂
Very late answer XD I would recommend it! Every system has its weaknesses so expect to see some, but the teaching methods foster a lot of thought and perspective.
That’s ok! Gotcha, yeah. We ended up enrolling for this semester and I really do enjoy being part of a group like this, but the homework is sometimes a lot.