OrangeArmadillo

@hybridlore

Oh, this is unrelated, but by the way, how is Challenge 4 going? What are you planning to do for your senior thesis? (I saw you were sprinting to work on it.)

You’ve seen that already? I haven’t figured out how to make a slack account yet. 😂

4 is going well! Classmates have been a little emotional, though. The first day this year, one…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Great! Yeah, I thought it was a really cool way to detail the narrative and make Sara’s voice distinct. I’m glad it doesn’t feel too distracting. Now to be more consistent with it 🤔😂

@whalekeeper

You’re good! XD

Oh, this is unrelated, but by the way, how is Challenge 4 going? What are you planning to do for your senior thesis? (I saw you were sprinting to work on it.)

I think I understand what you were trying to say, and I love that idea! A scene is starting to form in my head already 😅 The only problem is, I’ll have to…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Awesome!! Sorry I stopped tagging you, I didn’t know if you were still reading.

I’m sorry I didn’t read sooner. XD I seem to have the unfortunate tendency of promising my feedback on multiple manuscripts. Nevertheless, I am here.

Making the world relatable was one of my big focuses, because I didn’t want it to just be this unr…

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@whalekeeper

Awesome!! Sorry I stopped tagging you, I didn’t know if you were still reading.

Thank you so much for the feedback! Making the world relatable was one of my big focuses, because I didn’t want it to just be this unrealistic cliche dystopian. I wanted the reader to be able to see why the government was this way, and for the gra…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I’m sorry, that sounds really hard. You were able to find a doctor that seemed like she knew what she was doing, right? Have they been able to figure out different ways to help you?

Yeah, it can be hard, but most of the time it’s not too bad. Same. Mine’s more guilt/compulsive thoughts. Mainly just enhanced anxiety, but i…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Aw, I’m sorry!! I’ve been praying for you. Is it the health stuff, or just everything?

I’m doing pretty good. I still struggle with my OCD a bit, but for the most part it’s better. I do still have bad days though.

Okay. What time zone are you in? I believe the next one will be at 11 EST, but I guess that still counts…[Read more]

@theducktator

Yeah! It’s not too late, if you’re not too busy for March!

@ellette-giselle

Ahh, yeah. That would explain it

@liberty Ellette is in Brookside Stories, I believe.

@liberty

XD Yeah, poor Dale. That was a lot of snow in his mouth at the end.

@ellette-giselle

He already is. 😉

Oh boy . . . XD *whispers* What did I just get myself into…

Soo… is it pronounced to rhyme with bay-lick?

@linus-smallprint

Pronounced the same as Alec?

I was saying it “ay-lec” in my head, but I don’t know if that’s accurate.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, it gave me very . . . Socratic-discussion vibes. But it was great. That’s funny, I also like to debate… slightly lol. It’s a little stressful.

I don’t know, I just like him. He’s funny and impulsive (li…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I love it!!! Julian is amazing. The debating scene was a nice change from how they’ve had to speak to others in the past.

@hybridlore

I read through everything so far!

This is looking great. I’m really impressed with your style. It’s so confident and… I don’t know how to phrase this. Occupied with the plot. There’s always something going on, and because of the realistic dialogue, I can really believe in the overall realism of the world.

I like how the world and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Weird. Are you on the home page where it shows you all the topics?

@ellette-giselle

So, the website isn’t loading for me. But I know they send out a video with help to figure out how to navigate stuff. I know it’s super overwhelming the first day, but you’ll figure it out in no time.

@esther-c

Love it! The ending is intriguing. 😉

@ellette-giselle @esther-c @liberty

I guess the Chickadee tent was filled all the way, or they’re not doing it this year? I’m in Sunrise Peak

@liberty @ellette-giselle

Yay!! I’ll see you guys there!! 😁

Liberty, great section! 😂