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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Civil War Short Story Critque in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Definitely do not scrap it!!! 😅🤣 It’s way too good to scrap. Use it in something, make it its own something, but just don’t get rid of it. You never know when you might use it.
Hmmm… I think maybe do them separately? I like the characters and think it would be good to see more of them. If you did it all in one, it would be strange to…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic He is Risen!!!!! ⭐️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Civil War Short Story Critque in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Oooooh I love this!!! 😃😃
I agree with @gwyndalf-the-wise I would love to read more, even as just a larger short story.
Unfortunately, I cannot think of any critiques to give right now, other than Will wasn’t capitalized once. 😅 I really love the story! It feels so real.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks! Quelin was the first one I ever actually drew. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks so much! I was hoping the healing was at least somewhat realistic, but all I know comes from watching random vet shows… I’m glad you could picture everything well! That’s something I’ve been working on a lot recently, so it helps to know someone can. 😅🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Oh, don’t worry about it! I honestly wasn’t sure if I was forgetting something. You’re totally fine.
And happy Easter!!! 😃🎉🎉🎉
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
No problem!
Yeah, her powers are very limited so far. The idea is that this general time is when all their powers are beginning to really develop. So yeah, that’s just the small part, and shifting reality is the end result, though it takes tons of energy for her to do so. I’ve never read the Reckoners series, but I’ve been…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@esther-c Yeah that would help 😛
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks! Brycen hit Tali when everything went black and he swung out his fist. So, he didn’t mean to, but it just kind of happened.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Oooh, I love that!!! 😃Your writing is really good.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
You’re welcome, and thanks! Good luck with those classes. 🙂
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago

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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Cool
Oh wait, I still have Cal and Marcel! *facepalm*
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Guys, we really, really need some kind of doc
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 5 months ago
Freeeeeeeeeedom *points up* *mumbles* Chibi avengers…
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
As far as I’m concerned, it counts. 🤣
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Or we could literally just have one dorm for the boys, another for the girls – ABsOLuTe ChaOs
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I’ll room the Dogchild with Soren and Leon – they all seem to be more on the responsible side (if I’m remembering Leon right XD)
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, I know what you mean. I literally have had writer’s block on the one WIP I actually need to get done for the past few weeks. (And yeah, maybe a bit of procrastination, because I got like 18,000 words in another WIP in the past few days, because I had a bunch of stuff I wanted to do in it 😅)
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