OrangeArmadillo

@sarafini
Hi! (Ok if I just jump in here?)

This sounds really fun!! I would love to try it! 😁

Please tag me if you start one!! 😉

Hi @acancello !! (Is it cello prononunced sell or chello?)

So nice to meet you!! 😄 Thank you so much!

The Lunar Chronicles? Lol I have a lot of favorites 😂

Crafting, yes. Sports, not really 😅 I’m not good at them. (Running is cool!)
Ummm, as much as possible!! I really don’t do a lot of writing and more trying to write, xD
So that’s something I…[Read more]

@solfyre

Oh, and yes I’m nearly done with the next chapter. 😅🤣

Yess!!! 😂 Sorry, these cliffhangers 😅😟

Have you read keeper of the lost cities?

Oh, and all that makes way more sense!! 😆

No problem!! Happy to help! ☺️

@hybridlore

Oh, and yes I’m nearly done with the next chapter. 😅🤣

@hybridlore

Yeah, I’m definitely looking for critiques! My first drafts especially need it XD

The scene on top of the ship may have been a little muddled because it was the first time I was actually figuring out what the top of the ship was going to look like instead of what I was actually writing. XD I do that a lot. Anyway, yeah, I’ll d…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Marcel

What a cry baby.

Marcel snorted, and punched Cal’s arm. “Let’s go find a wreck room or something.”

The tired circles around Cal’s eyes seemed to expand, like a raccoon’s. He ignored Marcel, and pushed forward. “Hey, don’t blame Fynn. It was my idea to jump him. If you want to pick a fight with…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Amazing!! 🤩 I can’t wait to read the next chapter!! (Please tell me you’re almost done!)

Just a few things I noticed: (Sorry if you weren’t looking for critiques. And feel free to ignore any of this! Just trying to be helpful)

The one scene with her standing on the top of the ship — it kept going back and forth between…[Read more]

@keilah-h @landric @thearcaneaxiom @gwyndalf-the-wise @hybridlore

Alright, here’s chapter… 7? Lol. Yeah it is. Feels longer cause they’re all so long… XD

Chapter 7

As morning comes to our side of Aavian, I sit out on the wing of the ship while rain pours down. Dark clouds loom overhead, sending branching lightning down to grasp for the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Sorry about not replying sooner. This week was hectic. Anyway. Gimme till tomorrow morning at the latest.

@godlyfantasy12

THANK YOU!! XD His story is actually not in development rn, since he’s more of a personal brainchild than anything else… meaning I don’t share his actual story with people… but ya know, maybe I’ll actually write something for him, let him see the light of day XD

And IKR, that album is SO GOOD! My favorite song is Caesar, I…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I think it would be perfectly fine! I mean, like you said, it’s your book. On top of that, I’ve read plenty of books that change up creatures from mythology, or the events that happened in their legends. I doubt you’d get a whole lot of people complaining about the difference being inaccurate either way.

For example, Sirens have…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I don’t know what any of it is, at least not really, so don’t feel bad XD

@sarafini

I might try this sometime if I get the time. We’ll just have to see lol

Hi @sarafini !! Nice to meet you 😉

1. No! I’ve never heard of that 😅 It sounds cool, tho!!

2. I always say reading, but I don’t know if that really counts 😂😅 Otherwise probably math

3. Usually top Christian playlists!!

4. Umm… Mostly other books, or movies 😂 Sometimes completely random stuff.

@euodia-vision

Thanks! Welllll, Euodia is…

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@Landric

Just realized I spelled thieves wrong 😂😅

Not me realizing I just said “homeschool” instead of “homeschooled”…it’s pretty bad when your grammar is wrong on a writer forum XD

@LoopyLin

Yeah!!! (I know! I’ve only met 1 other!)

Ooh, probably Kate/Mr. Benedict lol. Constance is awesome tho 😂

Sounds amazing!! Will definitely have to join 😁

@karissa-chmil

Yes it is!! Umm … well I just learned Gavi’s song by Lindsey Stirling for my recital this spring 😅 probably my favorite, but also Martini’s Gavotte is really…[Read more]

@LoopyLin

Oh awesome!! I loved the Mysterious Benedict Society 😁 and alcohol markers are super fun!

@karissa-chmil

Thank you!! 🤩 Almost two years (I started really late, lol).

Do you play any instruments??

That’s hard 😅 Personality-wise or other?

I usually write whatever character pops into my head, or a generic girl character if I don’t…[Read more]

Hehe I love rambling

Oh and on top of that, it’s best to have all your obstacles follow a cohesive outline, so I’d recommend using the Three-Act-Story-Structure as a timeline to put your events on, if you haven’t already. Abbie Emmons has a great template if you decide to use it 😋

Also, the whole idea of a peaceful godly kingdom reminds me of the album Dear Wormwood by the Oh Hellos, which I’m listening to rn. I’d definitely recommend you listen to it while brainstorming. 😉