OrangeArmadillo

@ellette-giselle

OH!!! This is the Leon from the RP!!!!

@ellette-giselle

Yayyyy!!!! Julian!!! And more people!! 😆

It looks good! I liked the flashbacks into Joseph’s backstory. The only thing was I caught a sentence or two that didn’t flow well— “It was evening of the next day.” for example. Maybe you could change it to, “it was the next evening?” Idk. I’m sure it’s fine if you leave it.

@the-ducktator

I’ll be praying! 🙏

@ellette-giselle Oops, I didn’t see your post.

@the_lost-journal

It’s okay, no one is going to hate you. Ellette wasn’t being serious about really kicking you off KP, and like she said, it’s hard to tell online whether someone is joking or not. I understand that you have a lot going on, but I think you over reacted. If you are hurt by something that someone says, maybe try to clarify what…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Lolol. And yeah, I can see what Koshka is saying, but that wasn’t really what I was thinking while I read it. I thought the scene was great.

@ellette-giselle

Ohh, I’m sorry. I didn’t know that was a rule. 😅

@ellette-giselle

Oof, yeah, I get that. It is one of the hardest parts about stories, but also one of the things that really makes you love the characters!

I thought it was pretty realistic that the boys would be quick to fight with each other because they are worn out and worried. Sabina’s idea to help them make up was pretty smart. And she g…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yep! lol. I read pretty fast sometimes, but it wasn’t that long of a section. Plus I saw pretty much as soon as you posted it. 😅

@ellette-giselle

Aww, I love it!!! 🥰

@keilah-h

I used Simublast, it was the first website I could find that didn’t take forever to load. 😌

@raxforge @freed_and_redeemed

I mean, the topic is very broad. It could be as simple as showing the leaves of a tree withering and dying, or the spiritual death and resurrection of a new believer. It doesn’t necessarily mean you have to show someone dying–and even if you do, there’s a way to handle it in a way that doesn’t glorify…[Read more]

@keilah-h

it could be your character speaking if you want, there’s no confimation so it’s up to the reader.

Yeah totally. I saw the hat line as my own character’s line, since he has a hat, but it works for more than one character.

@raxforge

Thanks for answering my questions :]

Crosshair also could’ve been the guy who said “No” to breakfast, although that could easily have been Alpha as well.

That person was addressed by the president as Markus Haziair

@keilah-h

I’m leaving the dialogue up to interpretation. XD Although I have my own idea of who was speaking

@keilah-h @esther-c @lydibug @loopylin @jonas @godlyfantasy12 @freed_and_redeemed @smiley @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @rae @lightoverdarkness6

Warning, everyone… this part is pretty chaotic because everyone is in the same room, trying to figure out what is going on, talking over each other. This is also the exposition part.

Briefing Over…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Is this because the profile update links weren’t working?

@freed_and_redeemed

I love it! They are so sweet!!!

@the_lost-journal

Hello Magic Potato. What potato am I?