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@godlyfantasy12

Don’t worry that makes total sense – I started with like, six, and I mostly stick with two now 😂 So yeah, do what makes sense for you!

Jem 2.0

This is your last call. Passengers, please make your way to the commons as we prepare for liftoff.

Jem cocked his ear toward the speaker, and began sloshing slowly in the direction of the commons, as if hinting for the others to move.

“Let us go. It feels like we have been standing here for twenty-two days, five hours, thirty-two m…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

😔

I often write my RPs in a document or on my email drafts before posting, so I have it saved if it doesn’t come through. Maybe that would help?

@godlyfantasy12

Gus

Almost immediately, a distant, high-pitched reply sounded.

Gus pricked up his dark, velvet ears, and whirled around.

On the horizon, as if divided from him by a gaping no man’s land, a tiny head bobbed along the waves. The unknown being splashed feebly, but didn’t seem to be making any progress.

Gus’s nostrils flare…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Nope, I didn’t even know who that was until I just now googled it XDXD

I just combined an old fantasy character and an idea I had recently, and there Gus is, lol.

Alright, here’s mine! Simple bio:

A lamb-like creature, with a gentle spirit. He belongs a new land plagued with civil war, driven to the last line of defense, lead by child generals. He is not opposed to violence entirely, but not opposed to friendship either.

Gus

“Peace, oh men,” Gus said, teeth chattering, “even as I die.”

He curled hi…[Read more]

@koshka

They act so much like real bros 😂

@godlyfantasy12 @grcr

Mine only goes on two legs too, so… *shrug* Actually, I think Koshka’s characters go on two legs.

@thearcaneaxiom

Sorry it took me so long to do this! I’m finally getting around to it. Long replies intimidate me a little bit lol.

Yeah, it’s ok to to use an algorithm every now and then. I personally shun it more often than not in preference of finding a mechanic, and then building off of it in all directions, thus finding all the aspects and e…

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@godlyfantasy12

This sounds cool! I think Whaley gave some good advice here, but one thing I wanted to mention, I guess.

I usually consider the inciting event to be: the thing that happens, making it so the character can’t go back to normal. But I know that won’t always apply, and each book is unique to itself.

Another thing I noticed — Ara…[Read more]

@koshka

Cool, love your character’s bios ❤️

What about a character who is mostly animal? As in, all animal sometimes, and changes back to partly human when interacting with humans, having human like thoughts, etc.

He’s kind of like a mythical faun.

@freedomwriter76

ANOTHER fanfic, girl?? 😅😂

Just kidding, I really like it… lolol.

@godlyfantasy12

I never said God created an evil being. We did choose to be evil in the fall. I was never disagreeing with you there 😊 That Choice is what makes us all sinful.

But yeah, we can leave it.

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Ah, well I will still eat my tarts with glee 😜

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, okay…

I guess… Just maybe think about it, if you ever become comfortable enough? I can’t tell you what to think about, only that we should approach everything with truth-filled eyes.

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Yes I did, the pastry tart metaphor was.. illuminating XDXD I loved it!

@godlyfantasy12

Here’s the thing… In the Bible, you can see many places where the word evil is used interchangeably with the word sinful. The word evil can be used for different things (sometimes with a whole different meaning entirely) but it is used to describe sin.

I would say sin is profoundly immoral and wicked. After all, we should spend…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Insecurities.

Okay, here’s the bread and butter of it when it comes to my personal opinion –

I agree with you that they can be used as a character flaw, this is more of a tangent –

I feel like they comprise ninety-percent of character arcs in modern day YA, and I… kinda want the scales to shift? 😂 Is that just me?

Like, I…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Okay, I’m so glad we straightened that out 😅😂

That is MY bad by using that word in that way, and I apologize.

So I guess what I mean is:

Active arc: Triumphing over a sin you didn’t know you had

Passive arc: Learning you didn’t have a sin you thought you had

Does that make sense?

@godlyfantasy12

OH MY GOODNESS I just realized… I think we’re each using the word “flaw” differently

I’m using it to mean, “sin”

Is that what you mean?

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Also I’m sorry for arguing this late. I shouldn’t be going to far into this, when I’m not absolutely sure if I’ll agree with my past self in the morning XD

@godlyfantasy12

LOLOLOL 😂😂😎 There ya go, do with it what you will ❤

So…

Is there some way Zolten’s death might connect with November?

(I mean, fundamentally he’s on the same path as Ara, but it would be nice if it meant something specific to him, too)

…Maybe something to do with November’s dad? Idk.

@godlyfantasy12

*Pulls back* Okay, I’ll slow down…

First off, “influenced by others” was probably not the correct choice of word.

Being influenced by others can indeed be a flaw if you take it too far, make all your decisions based on others, etc. But that’s not what I meant. I just meant any normal influence in general. For example, it’s…[Read more]