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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
Yay!! They finally found shelter!
Good transitioning scenes. I feel bad for the woman and the kids though.
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whaley replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Well, done at :40. It went well, although I’d like to have people to chat with. Maybe we should set up times when people can pop on and sprint together.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 2 days ago
And I get it, digital art can be frustrating to work with sometimes.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 2 days ago
Good job! I can tell both of you put work into this <3<3
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whaley replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Beginning semi-detailed chapter outlines for Project Murcadox. Join if you like! :40
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
Good section. I don’t have much to say about it. The stakes are rising.
“How are you boys holding up?”
“Fine, but we’re freezing,” Rolf said.
This took me back to that one scene with the soldiers… 😳 I was like, “Oh no.”
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @anyone
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whaley replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 week, 3 days ago
That does it. I’m going to work on this project as hard as I can after I finish the thesis abstract.
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whaley replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 week, 3 days ago
I’m not sure how I feel about what you said, because one of the plot points includes making a brave phone call.
…This is a sign.
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whaley replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 week, 4 days ago
Oh really? I love them. It’s so fun to start tying them together in subtle ways.
Oh don’t get me wrong, I still love it.
And neither of the two guys have met. 😂
And that’s when things get fun, when characters are technically connected but they haven’t met yet
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Ikr? Awesome
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Graphic novel artists are the goat, for real. I don’t know how they do it.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
my brain: he just got SHOT and is BLEEDING OUT IN A FLOODING UNDERWATER FACILITY and you’re commenting on the LINEWORK????
Having no emotional connection to Sniper, my eyes immediately go to the art technique. I’m heartless. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 week, 4 days ago
Multiple POVs are lowkey traumatizing for my brain because you have to tie so many different colored strings together. It’s madness. Madness, I tell yea.
Escape while you still can… *Gazes into the distance* *Flops face down into my pile of manuscripts*
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
🤣 I figured Crosshair would go through something like that since you like him so much
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Well then, you’re much less responsible for torture than me, lol. I still haven’t found anyone who’s done the same things I’ve done.
I like the line work on that panel, verrry nice.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
I know nothing about season 2 girl, I haven’t watched it. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 week, 4 days ago
But it’s a three-way POV, so there are two other MCs.
Three-way POVs for the win. 🙃 I’m doing the same thing with my dream project. It’s so complex though, takes forever to figure out. But it is easier to make one MC less likable and tuck their POV under the rug until they’ve developed enough to root for.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Does the hunger games thingy count as fan fiction though?
Never thought of it that way before, but yeah, you’re right.
I’m kinda busy rn too. (Finally got a job yayyyyyyy)
Yesssss 🎉😁 Finally!! That’s great!!
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whaley replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 week, 4 days ago
I’m just going to let him grow on people as the story goes.
That makes sense. Is he a side character? I feel as if side characters are given more grace when it comes to these things because the story’s POV doesn’t depend on them. Protagonists with that personality are more difficult because readers don’t want to deal with that r…[Read more]
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