OrangeArmadillo

@smiley

but I kind of thought like Harry Potter (never seen the movies or read the books but I’ve seen clips of the dance they have and it’s like a boarding school version of a prom and they dress pretty fancy

Exactly

ELECTRO SWING.

❤️

Will return with songs shortly.

@calyhuge

Lol, not answering for Smiley necessarily, but they don’t look like bullies to me… just imagining them randomly beating up a stranger 🤣🤣

@loopylin

Yeah, these roleplays are really useful, even if you participate in them for a short time!

Ok, that’s EXACTLY how I feel about your characters 🤣🤣 Maybe we have similar preferences? Not sure what it is, but it’s so easy to click with your charries. They’re just so easy to recognize and love.

I just try to make my charries unique &#x1f…[Read more]

@rae

I’m not sure, but thanks!

Okay, got it. It all makes more sense now.

@loopylin @princesachronicle22

We did have our group of charries, me, Min, and Freedom. It just kinda slowed down. I say we find food. But idk who else actually likes describing a meal 😅🤪 Just me??

@loopylin @everyoneelse

😊 Babs is a little taller than Marcel, very round in features, with coppery eyes, orange and white hair, a bit of a pale complexion. I’ve changed her a lot from the original design. Those who knew her before this moment might get confused… which again, I apologize 😂

Also…

Again, @everyone

I’ve realized I cannot continu…[Read more]

Also, I use Canva! It’s really great for moodboards!

@rae

Lol. I like the descriptions you posted of nature!

Just wondering, cause I can’t think of any other way to do it XD

@aranel

What’s wrong with the characters dying because they just ran into the monsters?

@loopylin

O.O

I LOVE IT!! 😍❤️🤣 Oh my stars thank you so much, that cheered me up, it’s thAt cute. AAAUUURrGH it’s so adorable. *HugzyoubecauseIreallywantto* You’re so sweet 😊❤️

@rae

Oh and the paragraph about heaven and hell didn’t seem too preachy. I mean, I think it’s fine to have it in there since it was really short. Great job on the description of that, too! I think it works well.

@rae

I thought it ended really well, I liked the mentor-y moment with Master Paul! I didn’t really understand what Cubespace was entirely, so the whole incident confused me a little.

I think Master Paul asked Nahim to fly the ship, but Nahim said no, so the Master left him there on the controls? And then Nahim stabilized it and went to yell at…[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, that’s happened to me too before!

@thearcaneaxiom

I like it! Thing is my favorite, lol. I don’t think you should change the name even though it’s a little mean, but it’s up to you. I think it fits her and she likes it, so it works.

The plot is a little confusing to me… a lot of the philosophy/science stuff goes over my head but that’s fine, lol. Anyway, nice job so far! I…[Read more]

@loopylin

DANTE.

He always makes me smile. Always.

@calyhuge

Wow you caught on fast. I’m kinda amazed

It wasn’t too hard 😂😋

@rae

Okay, phew! Finally caught up. And yeah, Chapter 7 isn’t showing up for me… so I guess I’m not, lol.

The biggest things I noticed were again, really long paragraphs. I think it would be easier to read if you split them up, but it’s up to you.

And long sections of dialogue without tags, like this:

“You can…”

“Read, write, and speak i…

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