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hybridlore replied to the topic Diverged in a Wood in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Awesome! I’m technically already in an anthology that I’m not sure I’ll have finished in time, so I don’t think I should sign up for another yet… I would be interested to read it once it’s done, though! And I’ll let you know if I change my mind. 🙂
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Aww, I love it!!
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Hugo
“I don’t have a lot of pastime, because I’m either working or on a night job. I… sleep. Make dinner for the lot of us, turn on some weird opera, settle down on an armchair, and sleep. And it’s the same for my brother and his friends. You wouldn’t believe how many times we accidentally sit on each other, and it’s like sitting on a y…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
Well PppppPpPfffffffffff
Goodness
I’m just trying to protEct the babies; what if you were going to traumatize them with some tragic events? Now they’ll be stuck safely in KP limbo forever.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
XD Sorrryyyyy
Hugo
“I wish. Unfortunately my baby brother? Seb? He was the second to discover how people change. It depends on your long-term mental state, not whatever you want. And most of the time, these changes slowly intensify your worst beliefs… To use his words.”
They stood still now. Hugo hooked his thumbs in his…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Hugo
Realn sounded like a fairy story.
“…Here I am talking so much! What of your culture?” Nar laughed, her curls thrown around her face, like a windswept flower.
She looked like a fairy too. Just a little.
“My culture?” Hugo blinked, and hesitated. “Um… let’s see.”
Nar probably thought he was looking for words. She stared up at him…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Aw me too! That was so funny XD
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh my goodness, congratulations!! That’s so exciting!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.
Nope!
2. Is Sef relatable? Can you really feel her and does she become real in your mind?
Yes, she’s definitely relatable!
3. Was there anywhere that you were confused?
Hmm, I don’t think so, since I’ve read most of to before, but I d…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c Wow! I really like it so far! It pulls you in really well, and I like the cliffhanger type chapter endings. I’ll try to answer the questions!
1. Were you drawn into the story right away?
Yep!
2. What are your first impressions of these characters? (Specifically the MCs. I know some of y’all already know these charries, but just p…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Hugo
“Oof.” Hugo wrinkled his nose again, and scowled. “I don’t do strict.”
Nar sighed dramatically. “Well… if that’s how it is…”
“Okay, I’m just kidding.” Hugo couldn’t play the serious part for more than a minute before breaking out in a smile, made of dazzling sunshine. It was just impossible. “All those traditions and rituals sound s…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
No no no –
You don’t understand. They are officially my character, by order of KP signature. See signature, please.
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@trailblazer Aww!!! 🥰 Yeah, I’m team Albert and Libbie.
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 8 months ago
I love how you draw eyes! I can’t really pull off anime eyes for some reason… XD
AaaAAaaHhhh my children
MY children
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Those two children of yours are the cutest, I just wanna give Lois a hug…
Hugo
“Heeey, I’ve got it! Okay – watch this -”
Hugo tried again, this time by himself. He made it almost to the end, but slipped up, and finished with a goofy swing freestyle. His feet tapped rhythmically as he tilted his head to one side, grinnin…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Hugo
Nar had all the elegance of a nightclub performer back home.
When she finished, Hugo clapped his hands together. “Flexible and agile are my two middle names, sister. Okay, you start like this, right?…”
He wasn’t a perfect learner. Only one step at an time. Unlike his rascal brother, who could picture a hundred moves ahead in his min…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Your smile is one.
*squeaks uncharacteristically*
Hugo
“If you aren’t horribly offended, I’ll just call you Miss Nar, please.”
He had never met someone truly familiar with an emperor-run system before. However, an emperor was more or less a dictator, which wasn’t too far from his own world. He hoped her world wasn’t consumed by organized m…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Hugo
Hugo half-hissed, half-laughed, “I’m sure whatever you just said was a good thing, Miss Nar.”
He had practically forgotten his manners in this modern world. For the first time that night, two spots of red glowed on his cheeks.
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hybridlore replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
That sounds good, I’m glad you were able to get a clear answer from God! I agree, I think it still definitely works even without the shorter beginning. And even if it does turn some readers away, it’s going to touch the people God wants it to. 🙂
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
You got thissssss XDXD I’m on Christmas break and am going nOwhEre so, behold.
…Everyone does stupid stuff XD BUT I would not call you stupid. You have an innocent track record on here, and that would be unnecessarily villainous of me.
It’s official, Nar has a crush on Hugo already.
OH MYYy that’s so sweet of her!
I just hope he…[Read more]
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