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@savannah_grace2009

GREAT topic XD I don’t have my very first story anymore (it’s probably in storage) but I have one that I wrote when I was… Ten, maybe eleven? That was kind of my first actual novel attempt. It only has like, two chapters. Brb, I’ll go find it to post

@fernweh_grace

Goodness XD That’s so fun. And yeah, crazy dreams like that always happen when you’ve woken up during the night and gone back to sleep again. Have you ever had a lucid dream?

@savannah_grace2009

Girl I feel you, I’m missing four adult teeth that will never grow in 😝

@loopylin

Again, please tell me if I’m writing your character wrong, or you want something to play out differently.

Babs

Babs wiped at her eyes. “Okay…”

They decided to do a sweep around the room, one girl starting by the exits, the other by the entrance. But Babs knew dolefully, as she trudged off to her side, that she would have seen the Gua…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Okay, I’ll think about it! No problem, thank you!

@hybridlore

Yeah, that totally makes sense! And you’re welcome, I really enjoyed reading it!!

For buildup, I’m not quite sure. Maybe Mason has a big decision to make, and something about the king helps him make that decision? Or maybe to keep it more line with what you have so far, something big rests on the identity of the king?? I’d have to…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

So, yep! Mostly just because of the curfew. I guess I was trying to show how the villagers were impacted by it, if that makes sense.
That’s true, I might use that word a lot XD. I’ll have to reread it and see where I can change words around to fix that. Thanks for pointing that out!
Yeah, I get that. I’m not really sure how the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay, I’m finally here!! XD

So, I was digging pretty hard to find something to critique, so I’ll do my best…

“A hint of fear is smothered in the master’s gruff tone.” – why the fear?? Just because of the curfew?

I agree that it was pretty obvious the man was going to be the king.

In first person it’s really easy to use “is” a lo…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

XDXD YES. You shall be one eventually, child of the pen. One day. I see it in you.

IM A CHOSEN ONE

IM OFFICIALLY COOL

@highscribeofaetherium

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YEEEESSSS

@jonas

And classes start again after the dance, which is the day after tomorrow in roleplay days.

@jonas

Not absolutely certain. There must have been one, but I can’t remember. And tbh if I don’t remember, I doubt anyone will because I moderate this entire thing XD Go ahead.

@jonas

Most of the basic teachers are set up, lemme think… chemistry, math, history… and I’m guessing the other main classes, although I can’t exactly remember. For optional classes, Philosophy, Botany, Dance, Art and probably P.E. have been established.

@freedomwriter76

Hey, how was your holiday, btw? Wishing you a late Merry Christmas, lol ❤️

@fernweh_grace

Thank you, I had a lot of fun writing it! I used to catch a lot of pill bugs when I was little. Called them rolly-pollies. Goodness, I don’t know how to spell that XD

Oh those dreams must be so cool XD I never dream about my characters. I see yours reveal their greatest passions easily. How often do they communicate to you t…[Read more]

@loopylin

Babs

Babs hesitated, then did the only thing she knew to do. She made a beeline for the closest friend.

Felicity stood watching Lois walk away. A strange look crossed her face as she glanced down at her still outstretched hand.

“Felicity…” Babs grabbed her friend by the arm, almost tripping over her own skirt. Which was pract…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ohh, I see what you mean. I meant the main character isn’t looking at the sky anymore, but yeah, I’ll have to change that. Thank you!

I shall not put this off any longer. I present: this poem. Also doesn’t have a name.
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Cue: The Synod. Dark mass of mysteriously hooded beings, bowing towards someone.
Warrior babe, lend us your ear
May this synod divine your fear
And heed its inner beck and call
The soul which into your place fell.
As host, you breathe the frost of stars
And not…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Hey, thanks for the compliment!