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@loopylin

*gasp* Wait… do I know this character or not? Do tell. Now.

@elishavet-pidyon

I’m not sure about different kinds of scars, but I figure if you’re aiming for simplicity, you can draw it in a way that communicates the basic effects of that particular wound. Zuko from AtLA has an obvious burn scar. But it’s not complicated. It’s ju…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

My thoughts are at your service 🥰😅 And you don’t overwhelm me! Only certain kinds of people/moods overwhelm me.

I don’t have that many close friends, except one–but it’s awkward because he’s like three years older than I am, and he’s graduating this year. I know he feels the same way as I do, like that it’s hard to fit in (be…

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@princesachronicle22

Thanks! And no problem XD

@whalekeeper

I don’t know who else is waiting after Loopy but I would love another character drawn whenever you have time!

@esther-c @theducktator

Thanks for the opinions!

@mineralizedwritings

XD they probably haven’t asked because you’re a little more private with your writing. I figured I’d just let you know I’m interested <3

XD Yeah, it’s 100% my fault for not making any effort. Thank you for the support though, maybe I’ll post something because of that :]
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@mineralizedwritings

😂

@savannah_grace2009

Ohh okay okay okay…

Just take a second to relax, cuddle up in the blankets or something (I’m messaging in bed XD), and remember you are not the problem. You are not the problem for being indecisive. Of course you are going to second-guess this – I know I would – because it’s hard to picture which future is better for you in…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Heeeyy thank you! And yes, visuals are sooo helpful!! I really recommend color coding. It can be overwhelming at times, but it feels like a huge step up from containing everything in your head.

Is it just me, or do we need more tips for creating actual hands-on plot?

Like, I like learning about plot points, but brainstorming the actual meat of those points – “the zombies attack here and trigger the electric grid in xyz cities” – is hard. And no one really talks about it.

Why should I include a zombie attack at this moment? Are these…[Read more]

@calyhuge

You mean you’re not going to publish it? 🥺🥺🥺

I didn’t say that. But I’m not going to say I will either, because I’m an undedicated uncontrollable teenager.

@theducktator

Sticky noooooootes. Those are perfect for this. I need to gimme some XD

@linus-smallprint

Oh yeah, I’m familiar with Fallacy Detective.

I think the most similar a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

You’re doing great Sara 🥰 You are brave to try counseling even though it sounds potentially scary and sensitive.

@savannah_grace2009

I’m glad you’re feeling better btw! ❤️ And I promise I am not thinking badly of your writing behind your back. I sometimes feel that way about my own writing, and I have self-esteem/anxiety issues myself about being secretly hated. I think you are a very capable writer on KP and definitely braver than me for sharing this…[Read more]

…@savannah_grace2009

Oh wow, a lot happened, and I’m overwhelmed just reading this conversation 😅 I can’t address everything y’all and Sara said, but I have a few small thoughts.

About the Pythonos’ redeemability:

I didn’t mean to imply that they can’t be saved! I just meant that they wouldn’t have any draw to be saved, so they can never be sa…

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Ugh I posted something long and it didn’t work XD

Min has way more experience with dystopia, so listen to her. But I’m working on a dreampunk/fantasy dystopia, so I have a feeling for the genre.

Dystopias are all about taking a philosophy or point of worry in the modern day, and running with it as far as you can in a hypothetical scenario. It’s…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hey girl! I love how consistently you’re working on this! Here’s a small critique which you don’t need to read right now if it will potentially overwhelm you ❤️

You’re so selfish…you’re a horrible friend, why do you think she’d ever want you, little Payne?

You shouldn’t even be alive.

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Don’t tell anyone…they…

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@mineralizedwritings

Farimiiiiiiirrrrrr

@ellette-giselle

I like the focus on gesture! It’s good that you’re not afraid to draw action. I have a hard time with that sometimes.

@savannah_grace2009

Wait, Cass is leading her on? Why would he do that?

Btw though, the age gap is not bad, especially with the time period.

I think it’s a pretty sucky age gap but I guess that’s beside the point. Does this world have a time period tied to it? Sef was looking at a photograph at one point and it made me curious.