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@esther-c

Yay, it’s out!! 😁

Hmm… @kyronthearcanin, @keilah-h, @jonas, and @liberty might also be interested.

@theducktator

Cool! I’ve been wanting to read that for a while!

Does anyone have ideas for drawing a character with a rough clothing fashion, without making them look edgy?

@theducktator

I posted one instance of Barnes doing this on the snowball topic ;]

@raxforge 🌬️ ⚪️ @keilah-h 🌬️ ⚪️

Yep, I celebrate Christmas!

I celebrate it with a little different intention than many Christians do. Lots of people believe it is morally right to celebrate it as only Christ’s birthday, and we should have focus and do nothing else; as a child I was confused about this because it doesn’t mention this holiday anywhere in the Bible.

I don’t t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I just did! They look great! Nice to see the pictures of what they look like. Joseph’s was a little blurry… but… I think I saw a picture of him handcuffed against a wall… 😳

@theducktator

Sounds good. Third person makes it a lot easier to keep track.

Maybe they’ll just have less important roles. Or maybe they’ll die.

Lol… 😳

getting sidetracked by a good book, I have returned.

Ooh! What book did this happen to be? 🤪

@ellette-giselle

Good section!!!

Again, you’re summing up lots of time here, especially at the end. I would maybe like to be shown instead of told some of that, but it’s okay if you just really need to get to the next part.

Joseph felt that for once they were safe.

Then, something happened that changed everything.

Oh no… 😥

@ellette-giselle

Ahhhh, gotcha.

Sure!

@ellette-giselle

Aww!! 🥰

So, one question—why would Amelia inherit part of her uncle’s inn? Wouldn’t that usually go to her brothers?

Also, I like that we’re getting more conversations between Joseph and Amelia. However, I feel like they’re all based on future situations—mostly just “what if this happens?” Except for this one:
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Also people like Ellette can have their limits, I’m not trying to shame that. 😅

I’m trying to think of a good way to put this… Say you’re writing a YA book about how loose relationships (no marriage, easily separated, “it depends on how I feel about you from week to week”) hurts people. Well, you’re going to have to depict a bad relationship in order to talk about it. You just have to. There will always be somebody wh…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I for one thought the spell images were kind of cool… I think they gave a glimpse into how wonderful spell-casting feels like for a wizard. You get this sense of attempting majesty, if that makes sense, and I think that aligns with Alan’s character. Also the fact that all the images had something to do with animals was rea…[Read more]

@koshka @ellette-giselle Okay, here’s one singular reinforcement.

Barnes

Barnes slipped past a colorful window, the rose and gold glass casting a soft glow along the side of her head.

The four students had exited the church, and were traveling at a slower pace. The leading teenager had kept the pace up brilliantly, and it was challenging at t…[Read more]

@liberty

Alright!! 👍

@liberty Hey, you’ve got to write the next scene! 😆

Also those could be depressive mood swings, they will probably change from morning to afternoon.

@the_lost-journal

It’s okay, I’m not that offended. :] Maybe talk to someone when you’re feeling more cheerful? (I know I’m repeating myself but I don’t really know what else to tell you.)

@rae

”I’m gonna hit RAE!!!” 😁 That’s it