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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle super cool!
I think my dad might have a copy of Fox’s Martyrs, but I’m not sure.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
So yeah, I will be sad, but I mostly get it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle which works for a story like yours which is, from what I can tell, supposed to be kinda like a fictionalized missionary/church history story.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
I’ve killed my fair share of teenagers….. and a few little kids……………..
Yeah, I have too, or at least not stopped such a thing in a fanfic if I’m rewriting it. but usually not a main character, and not super commonly on screen.
I mean if it’s realism, it kinda has to be done (oooof I sound so sadistic for saying that, I promi…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
but yeah I like the hymn at the back idea! maybe if you have any recipes, or games, or other things that you put an emphasis on through the story, you could add those too. If not to the main series you could have a guidebook where you put those special things + any maps you’ve made.
I honestly love those kinds of guidebooks.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
and I’m the one that briefly considered violently blinding my character who kinda needs his sight for everything.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle sorry ’bout that! Mostly I just read and enjoy the chapters. Others usually say what I have in mind.
you should be. I’m above nothing.
Executing a teenager and a pregnant woman is something even I would shy away from writing lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 months, 1 week ago
no offense to them of course.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 months, 1 week ago
me hearing a term in a youtube video and then looking it up:
the search: what the heck does blorbo mean
google: “Blorbo” is internet slang that refers to a beloved fictional character from a TV show or other media, essentially meaning a character you have a strong personal attachment to and consider your “favorite” within that universe; it’s…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle wow! I’m kinda scared for them. I hope at least someone will make it out alive.
Also, I like the hymn and suggest you keep it in. Shortening it if you have to is okay, though.
My idea? You can put the whole hymn in the back of the book, and if there’s a tune you had in mind while writing it, add that too, so people can play…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 months, 1 week ago
@whalekeeper oh that’s too funny! lol
My friend said she put me in a book once. I think I was some kind of elf character–I wanna say my character equivalent’s name was Cassiopeia. She had a really tall brother, whose name was Corvus.
Sadly I haven’t gotten to talk to this friend lately and I think she put that story off to the side anyway.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months, 1 week ago
@highscribeofaetherium yeah, that’s a good outlook on it!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
@rae I’m not familiar with this story about Baron, but I love it already!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months, 1 week ago
@whalekeeper whoa nice pictures of the art gallery! Where was that, exactly?
also cute doggie lol, what’s his name?
@rae I don’t know what you meant by saying your drawings are bad back when you refused to post them. They’re better than mine. Sure, I can get the overall shapes of characters down and stuff, but I can’t shade to save my…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
@whalekeeper
🤣 Boring books!? Kate DiCamillo wrote the Mercy Watson series! They aren’t “boring”! 😂I will admit that I have seen several of Dicamillo’s book that caught my interest while browsing, but their descriptions seemed kinda pain filled, and I’m not particularly interested in more woe in my life.
Have you read Beverly, Right Here,…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
What? You expect me to act mature??? I still have like 3 and a halfish more years till my frontal lobe fully developed! Curious george pajamas for me, thank you very much! 🤨🙄
You want a good book?
!!!!🌟Laser Moose and Rabbit Boy🌟!!!!
😁
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Power replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
AND IT LOOKED LIKE IT WOULD HAVE BEEN AWSOME 😭😭😭😭
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Power replied to the topic Kate DiCamillo in the forum Book Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
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Flora & Ulysses. The book that looked like it would be a comic book, but then got ruined because IT HAS JUST PLAIN WORDS IN PARTS!!! 😤 👎
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Twas merely a jest aimed at my lack of a writing habit (And my utter indifference toward this detestable “blemish” in my disposition. 😜)
Thou hast struck upon the very thing! I don’t plan too break my neck by unequally yoking myself. My compatriots would be bellowing “HEAVE HO!”, and I’d be shrieking “WHOA! NO, NO, NOOOOO!!!!!”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 2 months, 1 week ago
and the story was just so entertaining, so I was like “with a little work, I could fix this up and share it with everyone!”
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