@nova21
Active 3 years, 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Oh, okay. The parts you added were actually my favorite and pretty easy to understand
yay!
Yes, they were great! They aren’t the normal way people usually title chapters, and I really like that, it fits with the story well.
I was partially inspired by….I wanna say they were Percy Jackson chapter titles, but I don’t remember too well. I d…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@theducktator lol that’s their usual dynamic
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Btw did you see I added chapter titles?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 All righty! I’ll have to write some part of it for you to read.
and yeah I read fast lol
I’ll have to critique it fully tomorrow cause I don’t have time to type out a whole thing but I will get you that feedback!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@rae oh yeah and Alpha and Silvanis arguing sounds crazy.
why can I see a pair of angry Night Furies roaring at each other as the image of how that debate would go?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@rae thank you!! Glad you liked it, and yes I can agree the ending was amazing; when I read the original I was like “oh I gotta have this, it’s great”
I actually added the comic artist’s appearance; in the original, it simply shows them all talking and then the doorbell rings, then it switches to a panel of a door, then Scout opening the door an…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper you’re welcome!!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I read all of what you had so far!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Sef and Lilitu’s frog wedding was so funny lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 I’m liking it so far!!
I would say things are going a little fast, but that’s not you, it’s how fast I can read.
I love your character and place names, they’re really cool. And each new main character you introduce is really interesting!I have a story idea which is kinda similar to yours in terms of genre and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@koshka ooooh very cool!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 3 months ago
@smiley good idea
I rarely go onto those sites too and if I do it’ll be specifically for a fic that has no shipping or that I’ve researched and know it’s clean shipping
and ugh I knowwwww nobody ever finishes their fanfics
like I read this one a little while ago that had a good plot and the characters were pretty accurate to the original…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 I wouldn’t mind!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
kinda like how the Half-life games and Portal games are technically in the same universe but what you do in one has literally no bearing on the other.
(sorry for that seemingly random analogy, I was busy writing a fanfic using that story universe earlier, possibly a sequel to my TF2 one)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@rae oh okay, cool!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 nope, sorry.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 huh, your link isn’t working.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 ooooh that looks so pretty!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
it’s kinda interesting that you bring this up, bc it’s at least hinted at in the MCU that Steve was raised Christian
“There’s only one God, ma’am, and I’m pretty sure he doesn’t dress like that.”
And in the comics, it was canon that Steve was raised Catholic by his Irish mother, and I also found it really interest…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
“By either rain or sweat, you’re gonna get wet.” –Singaporean saying that also applies to Florida (where I come from)
“While on a cruise or vacation, don’t be that guy and you’ll have a great time”–another saying
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