@nova21
Active 3 years, 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@theshadow better “subjects” than “children” I suppose, especially considering how I talk about some of them. (not sure whether to glare or smirk at the characters in question here)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 3 months ago
Well, this certain rude character, if they get too much on my nerves, will be the topic of a short story in which they DIE. That is how I deal with rude characters i dislike.
LOLLLLL
Should I be glad none of my characters ticked you off……?
actually it’d be funnier if they did…..
SOLDIER! MEDIC! YOUR TIME HAS COME, DO SOMETHING…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon Wow! That was fun.
funny side note, when you mentioned “reaching the Dell” I was like “someone else knows that word????” cause I never see it in anyone else’s writing these days, but I have a charrie named Dell so I see it often. LOL
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 hellooooo again!
haven’t seen ya in a hot minute!
So you’re not really writing much, yes. But please tell me all the characters and stuff are still around.
Crosshair will never say it, but I think he’s been missing his feathery buddy Paxton.
in other news, I finished a fanfic for once, which has a new story…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
@rae awesome!!!!
Can’t wait for more!
Feedback time lol
Indeed, the fire showed his features mostly came from his human side, besides his grey eyes. His grey eyes were deep and filled with emotion
You don’t need to reference the eyes again. A better way of doing it would be like this:
…besides his gray eyes, deep and filled with…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@loopylin me joining this to see the memes and seeing Dante and I HAD TO COMMENT CUZ I LOVE MY FIREBOY XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@rae haha
I haven’t had to banish a character to being forgotten since I was like 13 and I might have lost the courage to do it now.
Crosshair, Hunter, Tech and the rest might not be the stars of any of my current works but they know they’re safe. They also know their limits though–five years keeping them has done its work.
Sniper…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@raxforge @stephie @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator
lolll this marrying conversation is so weird
I got it into my head pretty early on that it made no sense to marry my relatives. I don’t even think it was on purpose, I think my parents mentioned “you can’t marry your brother or cousins” once and my logical brain was like “oh, okay.” and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@loopylin oooooh that’s so pretty!!!! My whole family painted starscapes once as part of a class, and it kinda looked like that.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 you’re welcome! and thank you!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@theducktator LOLLLL That’s an actual Dickens quote?
nvm that actually makes sense for him to say that
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
I mean like i have a cheese related signature lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
@raxforge That’s awesome!!
My church did a trip to Italy back in ’23 and I helped with a summer camp there. It was great.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@theshadow ooooh that’s a good idea!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
@rae @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle lol
I end up deleting a lot of my search history but if I kept it I’d have some weird stuff too
oh also RAE THAT DRAWING IS AMAZING DON’T LET ANYONE SAY IT’S NOT
listen girl, I like to consider myself good at drawing, but I’m terrible at posing characters. You being able to do that puts you a step above…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
-The plot was good, I enjoyed what you have so far.
-I’d love to get a little more in depth on your worldbuilding, but you don’t need to do that, it’s just something I enjoy.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 I liked it! I can’t wait for more.
-The violence and stuff I can handle. About the only thing that would raise a red flag for me is what Rath did to Sef’s mom (I don’t remember her name), but you didn’t write that very descriptively and any discomfort I had with the scene was a me problem, not a problem with your writing.
-I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium awww he’s cute!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
“Slothy doesn’t like going to the doctor because last time she had her back pulled out and stuffed full of donuts.”
Did that doctor look like this?
(just a sketch, not an actual portrait)

Cause I TOLD him I was gonna be nice and not let him get caught and convicted for malpractice, if only he behaved.
Stuffing someone’s spine…[Read more]
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