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@linus-smallprint What I meant by “breaks immersion” is that I didn’t really want to pay attention to the spells. They have no use to me. They’re deeply evil in Alan’s world and useless in mine, so what reason do I have for needing them in my memory?

Also the part about the writer changing them didn’t make sense to me. Why not just not write…[Read more]

I’m kinda in between Whaley and Ellette on this. They both have good points I agree with.

It’s your call, Linus. Your story is the one on the line.

@whalekeeper I get that and to some extent agree. It’s just the inclusion of a detailed description of the spells kinda broke immersion for me a little. It didn’t seem THAT necessary.

@ellette-giselle

Oh why! Must it be a hand or foot? And why talons! Can’t you just restrict the movement! This is horrible. If he and Martha do get married, how is he supposed to hug her without slicing her back?!?!?

*feels slightly offended for the 90% of my characters that have talons*

I’M KIDDING I’M KIDDING

I mean, I have a c…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint Hmm, this was interesting.

How do Alan’s friends feel about this?

Does he realize how guilty he’ll be when he wakes up? I mean, he just dedicated his life to God and swore off magic a few chapters ago.

I’m not sure how I feel about the spells being as descriptive as they are. I had no problem with it, personally, although it…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Hey! I have a question about the very end of your signature post (“This sleeping child you’re holding, is the great I AM!“-Mary did you know) Do you believe that Jesus really was the great I AM (The one true God of the Old Testament, the Father of all creation?)

It caught my attention, because that’s what I believe! (And it…[Read more]

Does anyone here like warrior cats??

cause I have an expansive list of virtually every warrior cat name I have ever come up with…

They’re characters derived from tons of other fandoms, but run through the naming system of the Warriors books. Star Wars, Marvel, Keeper of the Lost Cities, Tron, Jurassic World, you name it. Various random video…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

I’ll second Whaley’s question. 🙂🫤

(Though you did “redacted” the post, so if you don’t care to reply I totally get it.)

@the_lost-journal don’t worry, people in this world aren’t walking around with bullet holes all over. that’d be a little too creepy for the frivolous nature of the story.

Luckily for you, I was just thinking about changing it out for something less threatening, but I haven’t ironed out what yet.

I have no idea how many snowballs I was hit with so…….

I’ll come back with 200 or more words. LOL.

@elishavet-pidyon

That’s a very pretty board! I like the dove in the corner.

(boy don’t I have a thing for shepherds. XD)

No shame in that. All my main characters are some form of soldier or warrior. XD at least yours have a more or less peacetime job.

@whalekeeper

one does not simply EXIST IN THE SAME UNIVERSE as their crush.

Barnes is brave just for that.

also hey, you have a mask, I have a security blanket (but only when I’m at my house). No shame in that.

Marcel’s is so accurate though lolllll

I think I ran out of letters to use so I couldn’t properly credit him for the quote lol

@the_lost-journal He’s an assassin. A sniper to be exact, so he specializes in hitting people from far away. The only thing is, he and all his targets kinda respawn because they’ve basically been put into a flesh and blood video game. So he’s joking that he’s shot them down so many times, he’s losing track of where he got them this time and is ru…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal haha it’s a quote from one of my characters don’t be too alarmed

@the_lost-journal

you’re welcome!
also I like your forum signature

@linus-smallprint ah. Makes sense.

By the way, how did native-to-Earth animals get to Ehverwyld? I can see the otherworldly animals like vandergrits and dragons having been there since that world’s creation, but what about the crows and horses, etc.? Did they come through the same portals that humans did, but by sheer accident? were they created…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings yeah if he doesn’t fly much, they probably would atrophy anyway.

The four wings connected design is cool; I have four-winged characters but the second pair is always separate.

@the_lost-journal

hmmmm……

I can’t quite choose.

How about C.