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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@ellette-giselle that’s perfect, thanks!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@ellette-giselle ^I second this.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I honestly have no idea on what my views on this whole election thing are. But I didn’t see Rowan’s conversion to be like, fake or forced or whatever.
The example of that criminal on the cross in the Bible, that happened, so I mean why can’t this one? Y’know?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@ellette-giselle That makes sense.
I was surprised to find I liked it too!! It’s just a really satisfying end to this story somehow.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I love this ending!! I was worried with how dark it was looking, you were gonna leave it off on a less satisfying note. But the Fox journal was hopeful, and I honestly love how you time-skipped it into modern times. Which, interestingly, makes it seem more real to me, the fact that these places would still exist in the world we…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
yeah, well that’s reality for ya.
is it really though??
(this is a joke reply, not a genuine thing you need to spend a paragraph answering and wasting your time lol)
yeah, Leon has a rough time of it, poor guy. I’ve gone back and four on writing his backstory as like a short side story novella. We’ll see though.
I think…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
bruh is this roleplay thing still on?
or did it die too?
if it is still there and still accepting characters, I had an absolute blast with Snake when he was in the character party roleplay and would love to dust him off.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 bruhhh that happens though.
I, for one, will be a fan for as long as you’re writing.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
more like a knitted hat.
ohhh
if you look closely at what the prince said, it leads to the suggestion that he was killed by the priests because he got upset at them for killing his son.
dang that’s dark
also it’s gonna be hard to deal with in the next part of the story. Say that against all odds, the new emperor does become a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
also the emperor only reigned for 17 years? That’s interesting. How old was he when he started?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@ellette-giselle Chilling climax, if that’s what this is.
“Ah, look at this!” Leon exclaimed, pulling the tray over. “A cup of lovely, musty water, with who knows what floating in it to give us a lovely surprise, and some rock-hard bread seasoned with just enough mold to make it delightfully poisonous.”
lolllll
“And after that we can count the…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 11 months ago
@the_lost-journal I made those kinds of mistakes too. I do them a lot less these days cause I have been told off a bunch of times, but I look back on something I texted or posted and I’m like “sheesh that was kinda rude now that I think of it.”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 11 months ago
@the_lost-journal it’s okay!! stuff like this happens sometimes. It’s kinda hard to tell online what a person’s true intention is. You might’ve said something intending just to point something out, and people might take it as harsh.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 11 months ago
@the_lost-journal I’m reading!! I just don’t vote.
I’m sorry that’s happening to you. I know how it feels to make something and like nobody pays attention to all your hard work.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
@rae @freed_and_redeemed looks like you two have the closest beliefs to mine.
Not that I discriminate based on that but it’s just interesting.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
Huntress
“I’m… Felicity. Sorry, but, what are you?” Felicity stared at Sniper and Soldier.
Soldier stared back at her, or at least, he was looking in her direction, his feathery tail lashing.
“Don’t do that,” I warned. “Staring into his eyes has a good chance of riling him up. Well, okay, it’s kinda hard to see where his eyes are…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months, 1 week ago
@theducktator glad I could be of assistance!!
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