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Active 1 year, 10 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 hours, 53 minutes ago
@rae you were asking about my currently unnamed fanfic
for a fandom I don’t even suggest getting into?? lolnot finished editing it but here, delete the space or something lol
h ttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1SXigHpJueaZyEEgR0myaKj5O-jRh7X2ko6EgxZAy5JM/edit?usp=sharing
I had a link to the same story several pages back on this forum but I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 hours, 38 minutes ago
You two have some issues with trusting authors. I don’t deserve this at all. What have I ever done to warrant this?! (lol)
I am an author and I don’t trust myself, so there! Lol.
trust me (or don’t haha), we all have done plenty to warrant being very sus of each other. It’s nothing to be ashamed of, or well it kinda is, but is…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 hours, 51 minutes ago
 even if we’re glad the character didn’t die, it often feels a little artificial.
While I agree with you that maybe killing off Adrian is the best course of action, especially considering this is supposed to be a realistic missionary story, I’ve also seen a story where it’s the opposite: They killed off a character because it…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 12 hours, 12 minutes ago
Thanks, it’s not that I feel ashamed, it’s that I feel like I am being self absorbed and selfish just asking for prayer for myself.
No, that’s not wrong. Especially in your situation. How many siblings do you have? Are you the youngest, oldest, or in the middle?
I’ll be praying for you. Is there a name I can refer to you…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 9 hours ago
@whalekeeper In my mind, I see it as:
Protagonist–The main character or character whose arc we’re following. The POV character in a first-person story.
Hero–Subtype of protagonist. Usually someone with a sense of good and evil, a person with moral standards they won’t break unless in an extreme situation, a person worth emulating at least by…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 13 hours ago
Yes, the defeating the prophesy junk is stupid unless there is a very valid reason. For instance, I had a character in a book who was cursed by the gods of his people because of a prophesy, but when he came to Christ he was able to flip that on it’s head and say, “you know what, I was cursed. But so are all of you. We are all cur…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 day, 13 hours ago
@rae yeah I can see that.
idk about misunderstood but tragic definitely.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 day, 13 hours ago
@freed_and_redeemed ugh you’re making me sad now
like in Freedom’s Fire you see him as mostly heartless and cruel, but in all the other books he is more humanized–he has a brother, he has a family, he has reasons for why he did what he did. Not that they were good reasons, mind you, but it means that it upsets you that he went down the path of…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 8 hours ago
In defense of the Irish, they were running toward a better armed enemy. They weren’t cowards. 😉
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 9 hours ago
The same wildness that would cause the Irish to break rank and then get ridden down by the patiently waiting English cavalry?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 9 hours ago
well also you can’t really talk about church density NOW as opposed to in the past….y’know?
pretty much about the entire country is really skewed when it comes to that these days….
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 9 hours ago
@calyhuge whoa he was your ancestor? As much as you might dislike him, you gotta admit that’s cool.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 9 hours ago
@power @ellette-giselle lollll this conversation has me just sitting here on the sidelines watching, I would be eating popcorn but I’m not a huge fan of popcorn, unless it’s popcorn chicken so maybe that’s what I’m eating.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 9 hours ago
@rae thank you!!
- glad I wasn’t disqualified lol
- confusion in writing is what I’m good at for some reason XD XD
- honestly though, I can see why you think this reads like a chunk of a larger story rather than a short story, cause it kinda is. I wrote it for practice and to maybe one day turn it into a larger storyline, cause that’s how I craft…
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 10 hours ago
Ah, poor lass. . . So horribly neglected. Thy brothers need some roguery injected into there spines. 😢
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 10 hours ago
Oh hogwash. So you’re trying to telling me that your oh so knightly bros have never poked you, put you in a headlock, or jokingly threaten to plop something slimy, crawly, or moist upon thy personage?
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 11 hours ago
THAT WAS SO GOOD!!!
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 11 hours ago
I’M A GUY WITH SISTERS!!!!
She would have turned inside out, hit the roof, and had a hysterical conniption fit all at once!
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 11 hours ago
BWAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHA!!!!!
95%
(It would have been 100% if Electro Duder had at the end had stuck something green and slimy on the girl neck!!!!)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 days, 14 hours ago
@ellette-giselle wowwwwww
That is so cool!!
My dad designs houses, so if I ever want him to make me a house, I’m gonna ask him to put one in there.
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