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@ellette-giselle Well I think it’s great so far, so yep, you did your job.

@ellette-giselle

ohhhh.

By Draft 4 pretty much everything is solidified, right?

And I don’t mean “don’t make them die through the entire story,” just “don’t kill them this early in the book without a good replacement.”

Speaking of which, I don’t put swearing in my animations….lol. That’s not what I meant.

It was the animation style and the characters that made my dad think of me.

@ellette-giselle

Hmm. We’ll have to see.

What draft is this? If this is a first or second draft I could forgive you for killing them off and yeeting us into some random’s POV, cause it’s still rough and maybe you just figured out that killing them works for the story. But if it’s the final draft, almost ready for publishing, and you did that, I…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I read the section! Good to have the characters remember past events.

Also, I agree with Linus, I think they’re gonna live (or at least Leon and Julian will, Aelic could die or he could live); it seems a little early to kill these characters off, especially since you’ve provided no real replacement protagonists.

@ellette-giselle not yet!! I just happened to see Linus’s reply while I was going through my emails. I’m doing animation work right now, but my “work” computer and my normal computer have the same email. I’ll read it when I’m on my other computer.

@ellette-giselle yep, that’s a perfect name for the character in the image.

It just…fits her.

@ellette-giselle That’s what I thought, it sounds like a girl’s name.

also that meme is peak humor lol

@linus-smallprint

completely off topic but Bastille is an awesome name for a character. It sounds like a female name, but I guess it could be for a guy too.

@ellette-giselle great job on this section!!

@thearcaneaxiom I know you’re not here much but……

Remember this conversation?

Me:  I can’t believe I’m doing this.

I’m asking you an Avatar The Last Airbender question.

I remember you were telling me to watch the show like your life depended on it years ago. Still like it?

You:

-Me being chronically inactive cause I’m about to serve a…

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@elishavet-pidyon ohhhh! That makes sense.

@the_lost-journal

coming back to answer the other questions!

i know I’ve been doing this a lot but it is super fun to be all three characters and figure out how they’d answer.

Like I wonder if either Huntress or Scout have gone hunting, or maybe they have family issues. Hey, have either of you killed someone?

Scout: Family issues, hah!…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon whoa!!! That’s awesome!

Where’s he or she going? Who’s running after them?

@the_lost-journal

People may not agree with me, but I’ve lived it and it works. It is refreshing. It is power! IT IS LIFE!!!

Isaiah 28:11-12 — For with stammering lips and another tongue will he speak to this people. To whom he said, This is the rest wherewith ye may cause the weary to rest; and this is the refreshing: yet they would not h…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

uhm… so [Huntress and Sniper] met by trying to murder each other…? How… romantic?

lollllll that’s what I thought too when I wrote it.

didn’t have time to answer any of the other questions but I’ll get to ’em tomorrow

@loopylin Roblox Regretevator. It’s a quirky game. The lore is really weird and wonky but just as a game it’s pretty simple, you just travel between minigames in a magic elevator and occasionally an NPC will join the ride (sometimes affecting players somehow, which is why he blames that one for killing him). He plays it every once in a while.

@the_lost-journal

What exactly IS your job?

Huntress: Well……We used to be mercenaries. Hired guns. We were supposed to guard our employer’s mine in an asteroid belt from his brother’s team, but it turns out it was all a ruse and the only reason we were fighting was because a sneaky Sunekite provoked the battle as revenge for the brothers’…[Read more]

@loopylin very cool!! The drawing reminds me a little of a character in one of the video games my brother plays. Unfortunately, he happens to hate her cause she’s indirectly responsible for killing him and making him lose a really good win streak. lol

@loopylin

What’s one place you’ve never been to, but have always wanted to visit?

Huntress: Well, thanks to our jobs, we’ve been to a lot of places….. I guess I’ve always wanted to just travel the galaxy without having to worry about someone being after us. Or us being after someone. I don’t really care where it is.

What is something you…[Read more]