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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice Ah, I don’t know. Sometimes it’s fun to criticize. I mean, if we know better than the writers, we must know a lot, right? And isn’t it fun to know a lot? Or at least, to feel like you know a lot on one particular subject?
I was just on a quiz website the other day and passed the grammar, history, and literature tests with fly…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@valtmy Good question. Maybe the house is backed up to a hedge, and since the stairs are easily seen by anyone, he wants to go by the hedge so no one can see him talking to her? They could be in the terribly cliche situation where her parents hate the guy, or at least he thinks they do, or he could be in hiding for some terrible crime against t…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@valtmy Haha! Since window scenes specifically aren’t a cliche, why don’t you do a balcony scene instead? As popularized by Romeo and Juliet, balcony scenes are an iconic sight in romantic fiction.
I looked up traditional Korean architecture and it looks like there are a lot of houses on stilts with railed porches. If the girl goes out on th…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice One of my favorite songs is titled “Without a Song” with the opening lyrics being “Without a song the day would never end; without a song the road would never bend; when things go wrong a man ain’t got a friend without a song.”
I always thought The Sound of Music wasn’t about a war. It was about a family who happened to live during…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice I have thought of two musicals we both like!! One’s my recommendation and one is yours.
Mine: Brigadoon
Yours: Anastasia
There! We have at least two musicals which we can both agree are wonderful. 😀 (unless you’ve changed your mind since our last discussions of them…)
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice Your description of The Scarlet Pimpernel and conclusion that you have no idea why I like your books is absolutely hilarious.
Put it down to good writing. 😉
Yeah, I get that. I think each of these theological questions has to be viewed separately and you can’t apply the rule from one question to another question.
I grew up…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@valtmy Uh…yeah. Sorry about the rants. 😛 I’m really bad at being concise, so most of my explanations seem to turn into rants. 😉
Why do I think musicals should be happy and fun? Well, there’s a precedent for that. Musicals have all been happy and fun until very recently. Sure, there have been a few dark ones here and there, like Lost…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice Oh yes, I see where you’re coming from. Hm, I was about to argue that you seem to believe the fantasy world doesn’t have to match up with the Bible, since you like fictional magic, but if I use that argument I’ll have to be on the side that says Carousel is bad. So…now I have something to think about.
Carousel could have been i…
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice There have to be! Back when we started talking about musicals I don’t remember disagreeing all the time. I’m going to have a look back at some old Writers’ Corners and see what I can dig up. 😉
I feel funny arguing for this side, since usually I want heroes and heroines I can look up to and am very adamant about that. But I wi…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@valtmy I didn’t like the fact that one of them contained curse words. I think that was Les Mis. Other than that there are two reasons.
One: I like musicals where the songs help the plot along, not where the songs are the plot. Those musicals are too much like opera, where they sing the dialogue. That’s probably because I like songs you can…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice @valtmy If they would just take out that one line (It’s seriously only one line!) about abuse in Carousel, it would be perfectly fine, though still somewhat depressing.
Do you agree, SeekJustice? Other than that it seems to end well, with Billy telling Julie he loves her, and the daughter finding a friend.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@valtmy 😛
Your definition of a “horrible story” consists of unlikeable characters and depressing storylines?
Uh…pretty much? 😉
Okay, so yeah, Liliom/Carousel has a pretty depressing storyline, and the characters are horrible in Liliom. The guy who plays Billy(Liliom) in Carousel, Gordon MacRae, is acting at his finest in the role and gives…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@valtmy Why pound it into your characters’ heads when they can act however they want, seeing as they are themselves in a fictional work? 😛
@seekjustice It’s hard to tell, because the book was written from the girl’s POV, and she said they were her favorite flowers, but I don’t think she ever told him that. I think he just bought them because…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@valtmy Hello again! There is so much stuff that works in fiction but wouldn’t work in real life! 🙂
@seekjustice Ha, yeah. 😛 I did read one book where there was a guy who used flowers other than roses, but it was only one kind, white carnations, and I think he gave them to the girl no more than twice or three times at extremely significant m…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, and about the flower thing…that’s cool in a fictional tale, but wouldn’t it be awkward in real life? I mean, how do you tell whether the flowers are intended for speech or whether they’re intended for loveliness? If the guy gave the girl “will you marry me” flowers, and the girl gave the guy “yes” flowers back, then the girl t…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice Yes, the worst thing for me in a book or movie proposal is when the guy goes on for five minutes saying things like “you’re the best thing that’s ever happened to me, I love you from the depths of my heart. God has blessed me with you and I know that I will find happiness if you will grant me the right to spend the rest of my life…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice Okay, well, rest assured that I have come up with an unusual proposal for one of my novels. I’m just not telling you what it is yet. 😛
Haha! That’s along the line of the unconventional proposals I was thinking of. However, I don’t like the ideas much personally. I would prefer a simple and sweet proposal, just so long as it doe…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, I was talking about two separate proposal scenes. 😛 The one I described is in a published book, and I consider it to be quite conventional. 😉 The other one is a hypothetical proposal scene which I haven’t written yet, only noted the idea for. That one is much more unconventional. Actually, I’m not sure whether it act…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice A proposal scene already planned out? 😛 I also have one for two lesser characters in one of my novels. It is, likewise, quite unconventional. I believe I have written one proposal scene so far, and it was set in the 1800s so basically he asked her brother, then called her in and said something like, “your brother is willing, so wi…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice Well then! Here I go. 😛
So, I was just reading a book and I knew this guy was about to propose. So for the last few pages I was just mentally begging him “please do not get down on your knee. Please do not get down on your knee!” And, a few pages later, what does he do? He defies my perfectly reasonable request and plops dow…[Read more]
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