The fledgling Artist

@seekjustice  Dogfights are cool, but I wouldn’t know how to write them either. 😀  Have you read the Tales of the RAF by Don Patterson?

Well, right now I have my stuff on a flash drive  so I’m trying to work on my western from our desktop computer. 🙂

@seekjustice Working on anything at present?

@sarah-anson Oh, good question!

Casse: Would probably rather have someone she loves hate her. At least it means they’re alive.

Dagny: Would rather  spend time in a cell with the person she most hates.

Jordan: Would rather have someone he loves hate him. He feels that way already.

Alright folks – Would your character rather be able to fly…[Read more]

@notawriter  Oh, I’m so glad you like her!

@sarah-anson  Those are epic!!!  🙂

@sarah-anson Look at the above comment. For some reason I thought it was a good idea to tag myself. Oi.

@skredder Oh, you set that up on your profile page. It’s the signature setting.

@sarah-anson Oh yeah, absolutely! He’s been through a lot, being abandoned and betrayed on more than one occasion. I can see him making decisions that benefit himself best because he needs to protect himself from others. Just what I got from his background.

@jenwriter17 Okie dokie. No problem! 🙂

@sarah-anson The backstory is pretty interesting. As far as Kirin himself: what are his favorite things to do? Does he have a little quirk? Does he have any side talents or hobbies? What is his favorite color? Does he like animals?

If you want to, try writing a short story with him in a completely different scenario. That might help you…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 @seekjustice Here is part 9. For the record, this ends on page 44 of 126 that I have already written, only 14,000 of the 40,000 I have done. And it’s not finished yet. If you want me to get you parts I have finished out faster I can do…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira
I think how they react would be a product of who the characters actually are. I haven’t read many of the other comments so this may have already been noted, but I would try to develop the characters more. Thankfully, KP has planty of articles on that. 🙂

@seekjustice Oh my goodness, no!  You were not rude.  🙂  You were just expressing an opinion.  The reason I jumped out so quickly last night with that very short post was because my computer was acting up.  (And besides, it was very late. 😉 )

So please don’t worry about it.  I never thought you were rude at all.

@seekjustice Yes it is.

Oh, I see.  Sorry it’s not to your taste! 😉

Well, I have to go.  Goodnight!

@seekjustice Have you heard of the Christian Christmas Carol musical?  They change things up a bit so the ghosts are angels (except Marley, who’s still a ghost) and Scrooge becomes a Christian at the end, but it’s pretty similar to the book.  I’m biased, though, since I grew up on it. 😛

Haha, yeah, but didn’t they grow up in the sequel?  I do…[Read more]

@seekjustice Haha, sorry. 🙂  I haven’t read much Dickens, but I normally like lighter reads, so that’s probably part of the reason.  I grew up on the Christmas Carol musical, which was done every year at my grandmother’s church, so I do like that story, though when I read the actual version it was kind of eerie… 😛 But I still liked it.

Did y…[Read more]

@seekjustice That actually sounds like a pretty normal plot for a classic. 😛  But okay, it does sound kind of interesting.  I’ve never liked Dickens overly much, though. 🙁  I prefer Verne and Twain for classics.

Say, have you had a chance to look up the Shirley Temple Princess and the Goblins?

@seekjustice I don’t even know what Little Dorrit is. 😛  (I’ve heard the name before, but that’s all.)  No, I’m not into Disney either.  Though I like a little of their really old stuff.

Great!  And you like it!!  That’s a score of two for me and three for you. 😉  You’ve liked Brigadoon and The Slipper and the Rose, and I’ve liked Anast…[Read more]

@seekjustice Haha. 🙂  I thought you had said she had only ever heard you singing the song, so that’s why I said you should show it to her.

Hahaha!! I do that all the time!  I haven’t seen the new Cinderella movie, but I watched the clip of the ballroom scene a while back and loved it.  Her dress is amazing. (I’m assuming you’re talking about th…[Read more]

@seekjustice You know, you really should show your sister the whole song.  (What a Comforting Thing to Know.)  By the way, how old is she?  I only know that one of your brothers is nine. 😉

How’s your Pinterest board coming along?  I really have no idea how those things work. 😛  I don’t have an account there, and only go on once in a while when…[Read more]

@seekjustice I’m just finished Tell Him Anything…and I just about cried when I heard her burst into “Don’t let him know – ”

Yes!  😀  Bill and Patty = best fictional couple ever.  “Sylvester – Sylvester!” is from those books, but before Patty meets Bill.  They’re also the window scene books. 😉