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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 17 hours ago
AHHH YOU HOPPED ON THE TREND TOOOOO
THIS TREND SLAAAAAAYYYYS ✨
but most of the time they can simply pull moisture from the air and rehydrate.
Mooooost of the time. Except when they’re in the desert. 😁 Or if they get freeze-dried and packaged. (That got dark…)
If a Pitt can’t sing, they can’t control the plants as they do not…
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 18 hours ago
They don’t have blood, but if cut the wound will spill light that in turn heals it.
That’s some cool concept imagery. 😎
So there are “laws unbreakable” like the cost of reason and the concept of ransom blood which are deep in the fabric of the world.
How does the concept of ransom blood work? What are some of the other unbre…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 18 hours ago
Literally everyone loves your concept, so you’ve got originality conquered and in the bag, girl. XD
I love it so much but it loves to frustrate me and taunt me with its vagueness. Maybe you guys could help me make it make sense?
Ideas ideas
– An Ink drawing melts away after a certain time limit
– After the artist draws something, they…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 18 hours ago
Thanks for the debriefing! I’ve read up on these concepts before, but it’s been so long since I focused on them, that I felt you were better able to summarize these things.
Of these, I think effects is actually the least important. Access and costs can both be very important, but cost probably a bit more so.
Definitely agree with this. Any…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 days, 7 hours ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 days, 7 hours ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic How do you world build? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 8 hours ago
ooh yes, the Pardalis.
Hmm… I don’t know! I’ve always called Pyro “he” but if he turned out to be a she, I wouldn’t be too surprised.
Here’s the fic!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SXigHpJueaZyEEgR0myaKj5O-jRh7X2ko6EgxZAy5JM/edit?usp=sharing
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 9 hours ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 days, 10 hours ago
@the_lost-journal you’re welcome!
tip: start out by tracing stuff. Pay close attention to what you’re copying. Eventually, when you’re comfortable with making a tracing look like the real thing, start drawing separately on another piece of paper while looking at the image as a reference. Eventually if you want to you’ll be able to draw stuff j…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 10 hours ago
@elishavet-pidyon wow, very cool!
Man, I’d hate being sucked into my own story, but that might have something to do with the fact that I’d either get eaten by a dragon who doesn’t know any better on the first page or I’d have to deal with an alternate version of myself who’s not afraid to kill, and will probably beat me up ‘cause I’m fangirl…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic How do you world build? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 10 hours ago
I have:
-Humans. Scout is technically a human, although he’s a hybrid, cause he doesn’t have any exotic powers.
-Changelings. These look almost exactly like humans, except for very subtle stripes on their skin, forked tongues, and eyes that can narrow to slits like cats’ or snakes’. They can change the colors and pattern…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 days, 10 hours ago
@the_lost-journal oooh that’s cute!
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 11 hours ago
OOOOOOPS. Sorry for the unclarified pronoun. How is this?
“Him!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was Him. Bân-Sercëon.” He spat out the name in a half-voiced growl.
Onnendel did not move. He simply gazed at Travenor with his clouded eyes and a gravity that ache…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 days, 11 hours ago
His accent is also really funny.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 days, 11 hours ago
@the_lost-journal nice! The creature I made Medic is one of my favorites.
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 11 hours ago
Aaand I’ll reply to everyone else, but I have to go. *Poofs away*
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 11 hours ago
That type of randomness must be preserved.
I agree. You can definitely keep that vibe and just make up the rules for yourself so you stay consistent. You wouldn’t have to tell anyone the rules of the system.
It seems like your magic comes from fantastical animals. I don’t know if that’s true, but I do think that would be a great source of…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 11 hours ago
@rae oh lollll
I’m glad he thought it was funny. Hope he enjoys the fic! When he’s finished, ask him what his favorite characters and species were.
….you did explain I didn’t make it all up right? That it’s just my interpretation of an existing fandom?
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 13 hours ago
I’ll try to join. Do you have a deadline yet? =)
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