Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin

@linus-smallprint

I like it! Isaiah and Cedrick are more interesting together than apart. Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life. But it’s fun when a character has a specific part of their personality that takes action easily. In this case, it’s bitterness. Isaiah could easily become part of a political plot…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint thanks!

It’s a shame we can’t comment yet. I have some good ones.

@linus-smallprint ok! I’ll go read it!

Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?

I didn’t! Where’s the appendix?

@grcr

(mostly because Burne doesn’t have the restaurants we have)

I commend you for making up a restaurant. Mentioning real companies/brands in stories is a pet peeve of mine. XD

@keilah-h

yours are so wacky lol

The idea was to be wacky, but I wish I could say my last one is an exaggeration. It’s the most accurate out of the three. 🙃

Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.

Life be like that sometimes.

@rae ohhh okay.

“blood eyes” sounds creepy but the concept properly described is actually really cool.

btw I’m still working on that one story I promised you. I just have to type it up.

I was gonna do it today but my dad called me over and is basically offering me a job at the architecture firm he works at. So I had to listen cause I don’t have a job yet and coloring over floor plans all day sounds more fun than minimum wage at a grocery sto…[Read more]

@rae bruh lol

don’t all eyes have blood in them though?

@linus-smallprint I haven’t, sorry. She’s kept writing it thoguh, right? I might go back and catch up.

@linus-smallprint Just so you know, you accidentally put chapter 33 before chapter 32, and you have chapter 30 twice.

@keilah-h

How about accidental astronauts and rogue test pilot. So yeah. XD

Thanks!

@koshka Who are they? Astronauts? Fighter pilots?

Either way the boards look awesome!

@savannah_grace2009

One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.

@ellette-giselle
Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through?

@ellette-giselle awww that’s a shame! I echo Linus here, no one was hurt right?

@ellette-giselle

Agreed. We could let it move at whatever pace it can without needing to flip back 392764683 pages.

Yes! I haven’t had time to open it up yet (word is on the computer) but I’m hoping to in the next hour (we got an extended lunch break today!!!!).

I could let him meet the mid-arc Leoron.

*Brain glitches*

@ellette-giselle

Yes!!

Maybe we should throw them together in an RP…but I don’t really have time right now for a real one. *Gazes forlornly at the Fantasy School*

Maybe in an email thread. That way we don’t have to work with a school system or wander a Castle.

Hmm. If we both have time (which is a very big if). Otherwise they can just hear…[Read more]