NatalieMarie

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Yes! Yes! Yes! I could almost weep now. Let it be so!

@Jess-Penrose

I’ve only ever seen TFA, but I want to see the rest. And I have had episodes 1-6 quoted to me by my brother. (every line, went for a whole day.) And the music. The music was played at the right times. So, I’ve heard the whole lot?

HAAAA! XD He must’ve seen it a few times.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Did you pass?

@alia Yup. 🙂

@allison-grace lol. Which journal? (I fill mutiple) Journaling is is one way I process life so… I have a lot of ’em.
One notebook I keep is for all the little life lessons I learn. It’s pretty awesome to go back and read where you’ve been in life and what you’ve learned.
Another is written in a letter form more about what I’m doing in life and…[Read more]

@Daeus Congratulations. The world could use more of those. 😉

@kate-flournoy Haha! I’m a mind reader too now. 😀

@bethanysinkyroses First, I think the Yellowstone setting could work. As far as the plot goes, my suggestion would be to make it a “back and forth” plot. What I mean is, have two distinct spheres for your story: one, the sphere of the MC’s interaction with her mother; the other, the sphere of…[Read more]

She can be a stereotype on the outside without being one on the inside. If she isn’t a POV character, maybe she could have someone she can confide in.

@bethanysinkyroses I’d agree with what Mark and Kate said. You’ve got a setting, but you don’t have any sort of plot. Predicaments alone are very boring. The predicaments need to build on each other. The outcome of one should lead to another, gradually making things worse and worse.

I also agree that clashing fantasy and slice of life isn’t a…[Read more]

@radically-surrendered I estimate you’re about 14 hours behind us then. 😀 Absolutely pointless to know, unless you’re me, with several friends in the U.S.

@bethanysinkyroses that would be @sierra-r and I have forgotten Cindy’s as well. 😛

The first thing that strikes me as I read your summary here is that you’ve focused a lot on symbolism.
That’s a good thing. But it can also be a hindrance. In my experience, when I focus too much on the symbolism of a thing, it comes out one-dimensional as only…[Read more]

@warrioroftherealm no character is ever cliche if they are approached as a person with a logical reason for being who and where they are in life. It sounds like this woman has a very good reason for being ‘strong’.

At the same time, I think ‘strong woman’ is frequently misunderstood or misinterpreted. A strong woman is not a masculine woman. A…[Read more]

@radically-surrendered As of right now, it’s 2pm. Is it Tuesday for you? 😀

@radically-surrendered Oh, very interesting! 😀 Video games are great to get ideas from, especially if they have a bit of a story that you could be inspired from and develop further. 🙂

A random question, but I like to know these things: What’s the time there? 😉

@seekjustice Did I hear my name? 😛

@radically-surrendered Welcome to Kingdom Pen! 😀 Your books sounds so interesting!

Anyways her parents were cast into exile on an island where the Kingdom sends all its criminals, ‘undesirables’, and rebels, and she was born there, but longs to see the outside world, for freedom.

This part reminds me of the…[Read more]

@winter-rose I blame @xonos-darkgrate‘s profile pic. XD

@joy I’m doing it! My first time was last year, and I only got to 31,000-something words, but it was a big accomplishment for me! It was how I was able to complete a 17,000-something-word novelette. Your novel sounds really great!

This year my story is sci-fi, which is a new genre for me as well. I’ve been plotting it since late August, and…[Read more]

Hi, @radically-surrendered 😀

What’s it like in Mexico? I think you’re our first ISTJ ever.

@salome01w4g yikes. D: I’m glad everything worked out.

@livylynn hey did you find the message I sent you with my email? If not, click on my profile pic and you’ll find my message to you. 🙂