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				<title>Joy replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 16 Mar 2018 05:04:24 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>And what on Taranar happened to this topic?!</p>
<p>Would your character rather take a train to a faraway place so he/she can enjoy the ride and look at the beautiful scenery, or just use a portal to get to the faraway place instantaneously to save all that time? (Assuming these are the only two options he/she has)</p>
<p>The Doctor would rather take the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-74029"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-you-rather-character-edition/page/10/#post-67024" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace H. replied to the topic You know you are a writer when... in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 27 Jan 2018 12:34:42 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>*gasp* this place looks fun.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/naomijackson/' rel="nofollow ugc">@naomijackson</a> I sooo do that all the time!</p>
<p>You know you are a (rather perfectionistic) writer when you have pressed the delete button so many times within the process of writing (this) single sentence because every word has to be just right.</p>
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				<title>SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic You know you are a writer when... in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 26 Jan 2018 21:26:49 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/naomijackson/' rel="nofollow ugc">@naomijackson</a> Oh goodness. I narrate my entire life in third person o_o 😛</p>
<p>You know you&#8217;re a writer when you catch yourself (awkwardly) analyzing people around you to base your characters&#8217; mannerisms and gestures off of.</p>
<p>You know you&#8217;re a writer when you repeat something some of your writer friends said to a close non-writer friend, realize it&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-68270"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/you-know-you-are-a-writer-when/page/37/#post-61438" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Elizabeth replied to the topic Chapters in a First Draft in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 25 Jan 2018 23:47:44 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/naomijackson/' rel="nofollow ugc">@naomijackson</a>,</p>
<p>I&#8217;m not really sure what you&#8217;re asking here, but I&#8217;ll answer two things-</p>
<p>One: I try to give each of my chapters a word count consistent with that of my other chapters, but if a chapter is a few hundred words shorter than the others, I don&#8217;t sweat it. Any amount of changes can happen based on how I feel about the chapter by the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-68188"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/chapters-in-a-first-draft/#post-61357" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Daeus replied to the topic Chapters in a First Draft in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 25 Jan 2018 23:47:11 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/naomijackson/' rel="nofollow ugc">@naomijackson</a> I don&#8217;t think it&#8217;s best to just insert chapter breaks wherever there is a cliffhanger. You want chapters to be fairly similar in length with just a handfull of short and long ones thrown in there. I believe writing chapter breaks in the first draft helps me craft nice chapter breaks and more cliffhangers because I&#8217;m planning for the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-68187"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/chapters-in-a-first-draft/#post-61356" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Skredder replied to the topic You know you are a writer when... in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/you-know-you-are-a-writer-when/page/37/#post-61355</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 25 Jan 2018 23:44:48 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/naomijackson/' rel="nofollow ugc">@naomijackson</a> I do similar things. Whenever I speak with sarcasm I usually say &#8220;She said, her voice dripping with sarcasm.&#8221;</p>
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				<title>Louise Fowler replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-you-rather-character-edition/page/10/#post-61295</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 25 Jan 2018 02:59:18 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/that_writer_girl_99/' rel="nofollow ugc">@that_writer_girl_99</a> Wash pets</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/notawriter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@notawriter</a> Lose memory</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/naomijackson/' rel="nofollow ugc">@naomijackson</a> He already has superpowers, and so do his closest friends (except one), so&#8230; 😉</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/skredder/' rel="nofollow ugc">@skredder</a> Glass door. That sounds like something he&#8217;d do anyway. XD</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daughteroftheking/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daughteroftheking</a> 7 1/2 feet tall.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dekreel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dekreel</a> Song they hate for three days.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/alia/' rel="nofollow ugc">@alia</a> On the run with an ally for three&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-68129"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-you-rather-character-edition/page/10/#post-61295" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Catwing replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 25 Jan 2018 01:47:36 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@rochchellaine Kay would be a commoner. But she&#8217;s smirking&#8230;</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/allison-grace/' rel="nofollow ugc">@allison-grace</a> Climb a tree. It&#8217;s faster.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/aviantrail/' rel="nofollow ugc">@aviantrail</a> Log. She doesn&#8217;t like being exposed.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/perfectfifths/' rel="nofollow ugc">@perfectfifths</a> Book with dictionary. she would probably learn the language.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a> In the clouds. It&#8217;s so much nicer up there.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dekreel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dekreel</a> Small crime and be ridiculed. She doesn&#8217;t ever want to&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-68117"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-you-rather-character-edition/page/10/#post-61284" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Joy replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-you-rather-character-edition/page/10/#post-61273</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 24 Jan 2018 23:28:36 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/that_writer_girl_99/' rel="nofollow ugc">@that_writer_girl_99</a>  Mmmm, high heels. Just as an experience.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/notawriter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@notawriter</a>  Probably be bedridden</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/naomijackson/' rel="nofollow ugc">@naomijackson</a>  Technically she&#8217;s already a superhero (sort of) who&#8217;s misunderstood XD</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/skredder/' rel="nofollow ugc">@skredder</a>  Oooh, spill coffee</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daughteroftheking/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daughteroftheking</a> LOL, umm&#8230; She would be okay with both actually&#8230;</p>
<p>Would your character rather&#8230; be forced to listen to a son&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-68104"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-you-rather-character-edition/page/10/#post-61273" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Skredder replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-you-rather-character-edition/page/9/#post-61253</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 24 Jan 2018 21:13:35 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think I&#8217;ll do some more of these, but for Casse this time.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/catwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@catwing</a> Raised by the Iguana</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/rochellaine/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rochellaine</a> She would probably rather be a commoner in France.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/allison-grace/' rel="nofollow ugc">@allison-grace</a> Climb a tree most definitely.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/aviantrail/' rel="nofollow ugc">@aviantrail</a> Sleep in the log. She would feel safer like that.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/perfectfifths/' rel="nofollow ugc">@perfectfifths</a> Read a story with a translation dictionary.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a> Oh, cloud&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-68084"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-you-rather-character-edition/page/9/#post-61253" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 24 Jan 2018 20:27:53 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/naomijackson/' rel="nofollow ugc">@naomijackson</a> .. well the first one is pretty much already Tessa&#8217;s life.. So I think she would rather the other option</p>
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<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/that_writer_girl_99/' rel="nofollow ugc">@that_writer_girl_99</a> high heels 😉</p>
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				<title>Snapper replied to the topic Spring Writing/Reading Goals in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 21 Mar 2017 19:26:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/naomijackson/' rel="nofollow ugc">@naomijackson</a> Never to late to make goals. This topic has just begun. 😛<br />
BTW, welcome to the forum!</p>
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