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relia started the topic Anyone want character art? in the forum Art 3 years, 5 months ago
I’m trying to get back into doing art more regularly, so I was wondering if anyone wanted a character drawn? (I could also do landscapes or buildings, but I’m best at people. Also better at girls, but I could use some practice drawing guys as well.)
Just give me a description, (photo reference would be appreciated if you have any,) and I’d love…[Read more]
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Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin started the topic SURPRISE PARTY! *VERY IMPORTANT* in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Lets plan an epic surprise party for the next person to join the forum.
In this forum topic we shall plan an epic surprise party for the next human who joins the forum.
For this party, I have three points.
FIRST: GIFTS AND FOOD
I shall bring le fruit bowl and party poppers. My gift for the newcomer will be a funny joke.
Reply with what you…[Read more]
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Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin started the topic in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Lets plan an epic surprise party for the next person to join the forum.
In this forum topic we shall plan an epic surprise party for the next human who joins the forum.
For this party, I have three points.
FIRST: GIFTS AND FOOD
I shall bring le fruit bowl and party poppers. My gift for the newcomer will be a funny joke.
Reply with what you…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@nanisnook @mkfairygirl @sami-eastwood @issawriter7 @nova21 @faith-q @morgan @elfwing @joelle-stone @madwoman @gracie-j @iluvhim18 @all-ya’ll-KeePers/Kapeefers
Well, I’m back in the car, and I have about 5 hours of writing ahead of me. Are any of you lovely ladies available to write for a bit? 😀
I’m sorry I had to miss your…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
That’s true:)
Oh yes, I definitely! Animals and nature are my favorites too, (I mean, I do enjoy abstract and planned scenes, but animals are at the top of the list!) Aww, you have chickens? That’s awesome! That’s one of them in your Profile Portrait, right? I agree, they are amazing to photograph:) -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Hi Morgan! I’m pretty late in welcoming you to Kingdom Pen, but anywho, Welcome!! That’s awesome that you write fiction/fantasy, (I adore those genres:D ). Your plotline for your story looks absolutely epic and *high fives* Narnia fans unite! XD Adventurous and epic music is definitely incredible, (a.k.a the Narnia soundtracks:)
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Not sure if I should add an idea to my book in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Yes, of course!
Oh, how fun! I bet that makes for some pretty awesome scenes. 😉
Awesome! I hope it goes well for you! 😀
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Natalie C. started the topic Keep going or jump ahead? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
This is very random, but when y’all are writing and you get stuck at a scene, do you make yourself keep working on it so you stay in order? Or do you sort of jump to the next scene that interests you so you can keep up your momentum?
Adding some peoples… (also this might go through twice…)
@joy-caroline @devastate-lasting @nova21 @ribbonash [Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Not sure if I should add an idea to my book in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
I think it sounds like you could totally pull it off! It would add another element to the story as the siblings’ bond will be tested by an addition to the family. Also, depending on your storyline, you have an opportunity to have scenes where the twins get mistaken for each other, which, in my humble opinion, would be a ton of fun to…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Not sure if I should add an idea to my book in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
@morgan Since it’s your book and I haven’t read it, I can’t really say whether it will “ruin” your book, however I think if you want to do it, go for it! Ultimately, whenever I have to make a decision about my story, I decide with my gut/heart. Do you want this? Will it make you love your story more? If yes, do it! And by the way, I think that s…[Read more]
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Jodi Maile replied to the topic Not sure if I should add an idea to my book in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Sure thing, and no worries! I totally understand why two endings would be difficult. I’m excited to see what you come up with in the end!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Not sure if I should add an idea to my book in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
@morgan If it fixes your plot holes, I’d say go for it!
I think that adding another sibling could help strengthen your theme, as others have said before, you could probably work around with fleshing some of your characters out. And if you’re writing a sequel, I think that if there is a problem that arises in this book then it could be resolved in…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Not sure if I should add an idea to my book in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
@morgan there are rare cases of male and female identical twins (I love the idea of that lol. Or at least mostly identical lol)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Not sure if I should add an idea to my book in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Hello! Okay so I absolutely love characters, they are what draw me into a book so hopefully I can help some!
Here we go, so, I think it would be a cool idea.
Pros
1. Help fix your plot holes
2. Help with the ending
3. May actually add to your theme some.
4. would be interesting because I honestly believe the triplets with a younger…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Those sound like really interesting books! But I only think I’ve heard of Pride and Prejudice and The Chronicles of Narnia. About Pride and Prejudice, I’ve heard a lot of mixed opinions about it. Some people I know love it and some people I know hate it. Why do you like it? Just curious, I’ve been wanting to read it for awhile now and I…[Read more]
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Natalie C. replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
@morgan Ooh, living on a farm sounds like so much fun! We have one cat inside, two or three that we feed outside, and sometimes we foster kittens.
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
1) Those are lovely choices! I love them both. Centaurs are the best (Inner Narnia fan kicks on😉)
2) Oh my goodness, it’s been a long time since I’ve thought about that character! He’s a ton of fun.
3) Yes, Peter is awesome! I have trouble choosing between the four myself, especially if we’re talking about the movie characters. They all…[Read more]
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Jodi Maile replied to the topic Not sure if I should add an idea to my book in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Hello! It sounds like you’ve got a really interesting cast of characters. I’ve seen that it can be a bit challenging sometimes to add in a new sibling to an already well-established group of siblings, but with that being said, here’s a couple ideas for you to consider:
If you’re introducing this new character at the very end of the story…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Uh, so I’m kinda late (*facepalm*), but welcome to the KP forum! I’m Lydia. 😀
Ah yes, fantasy fiction! A wonderful genre! My main WIP is fantasy, actually.
Here are some questions, if you feel like answering them:
1) What is your favorite type of mythical animal?
2) Who is your favorite book character ever?
3) Who is your favorite…[Read more]
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Natalie C. replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
@morgan
Yay, you like How to Train Your Dragon, too!! I love the movies so much. Do you have any pets?
(I’m Natalie, btw. I commented on your other thread I think) - Load More