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ella started the topic The Journal (a poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 10 months ago
Hey everyone! Here’s a poem I wrote. I wrote it really quickly, so it’s kinda rough here and there. I’d love y’all’s feedback/critiques though! (It’s kinda long, sry)
The Journal
One hundred Septembers ago,
he gave a small book to his dear.
“As you grow, it will too,
But only if you write every year.”
Ninety Septembers ago,
She found…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic What was the most difficult scene for you to write and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, I know what you mean. That’s an interesting thought–I’ve never really paid attention to authors’ favoritism. I’ll have to think about it. I feel like I’ve read that kinda thing before though, and I’ve definitely written it!! 😂
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Kathleen replied to the topic What was the most difficult scene for you to write and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 10 months ago
Oof, yes. XD I know those characters far too well. Have you ever read a book with a character that you had a sneaking suspicion was the author’s favorite character? I feel like the try-hard comic relief characters are often those characters, but since the author likes the character so much they’re oblivious to it. XD Not sure if you’ve c…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic What was the most difficult scene for you to write and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 10 months ago
Definitely. On a slightly different note, I hate it when people write comic relief characters who are so try-hard!! 😄 I almost put the book down (e.g. Uriah in the Divergent series–I liked him in the first book, but in the last two, he was super cringy) Anyways, it’s interesting to see how so many writers (most of the time) s…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic What was the most difficult scene for you to write and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 10 months ago
I think what you mentioned right there is the epitome of writing. Most likely all writers at one point or another write about situations we have no experience ever doing but write about it as if we did it just that morning. XD And it’s totally prevalent when writing banter between two characters wholly different from you. Their…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic What was the most difficult scene for you to write and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 11 months ago
I struggle with everything everyone else has mentioned, but I always have the hardest time trying to make friendly banter between two characters. Since I write in a different setting than real life, I can’t use the banter between me and my friends as inspiration. (It’s also mostly cheesy stuff anyways. 🙂 ) So yeah, I’ll be w…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic What was the most difficult scene for you to write and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 11 months ago
Is it bad that I’ve never written romance in any form before? I love creating deep, meaningful, and complicated relationships, but never romance. Probably because I don’t read romance often, and I’m only seventeen so romance isn’t something I think about, like, ever. XD
But I can see how writing romance would be difficult.…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Prologue Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, I get it. Characters like that are hard, but I love to read and write them!!
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ella replied to the topic Prologue Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
This is great! The first sentence is amazing! 😃 Wonderful job!
If you wanted to, it might be interesting to make Corvina more stoic on the outside, but conflicted only on the inside. As a servant of the Destroyer, I would personally want to try to keep my feelings to myself, lol!! 😂
Thanks for sharing!! I hope you post more…[Read more]
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Kathleen started the topic What was the most difficult scene for you to write and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 11 months ago
What was the most difficult scene for you to write and why?
I’m not sure if this scene was THE hardest I’ve ever written, but it was definitely a challenge. The scene was a rooftop fight scene that I wrote at the beginning of this year. It was the first time I’d written a fight scene on a rooftop (or any rooftop scene, for that matter) and their…[Read more] -
Kathleen replied to the topic How has your writing changed since you first started? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 11 months ago
I just watched AtLA for the first time last month, and as someone who was expecting the typical kids show, (or just any tv show for that matter), it blew my expectations right out of the water. Particularly with what you mention with Zuko’s character arc. I love the thought and care the writers put into him and the entire story.…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic Short Story Secret Santa? (Idea) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
This is an awesome idea! I’ve been in sort of a short story writing spree the past couple months so this is perfect. And doing this post Christmas is also a great idea to have something to look forward to, (and give us more time to write the short stories). XD
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Kathleen replied to the topic Bullet Journaling in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
I love bullet journaling! I’ve been doing it for a couple of years now, and it’s the perfect mashup of both my love for organization and doodling! Plus, they’re super fun to look back on and remeber where you were years ago.
My favorite bullet journaling YouTuber is AmandaRachLee. She’s great if you want some bullet journal ideas…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic How has your writing changed since you first started? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 11 months ago
Exactly! I don’t just want to write entertaining stories, I want to write stories that last forever.
Haha, yes. I think we’ve all at some point wrote totally spontaneous stories and wrote whatever cool thing popped in our heads first. XD
But like you said, with structure the story ideas can be fully utilized to…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic One-Sentence Story Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Sorry it’s so small!
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ella replied to the topic One-Sentence Story Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
It was on the night of the Finding when I received the powers of the wind.
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ella replied to the topic One-Sentence Story Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@devestate-lasting, @godlyfantasy12
A thousand years ago, I was taken from my forest, chosen by the Great Dragon to become his immortal servant–I never thought I would become his best friend.
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