MNValentine

@reaganramm  You’re back!! Where have you been?! X)

Let’s see…

• I need help making my characters and character arcs more realistic and deep
• I need help making meaningful themes and symbols
• I need help with the show-don’t-tell concept
• I especially need help with self-doubt, and putting my identity in Christ instead of my work
• I need…

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@introvert_girl

Hmm… What I can think of that might help you get yourself more into writing descriptions is to describe things in your POV character’s voice (unless you’re writing in omniscient) so that it shows character as well.

Avoid boring and cliche descriptions and make those sentences just as snappy and quotable as your dialogue. Use…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart  Congrats!! I always love congratulating people when they move up a level 😀

*coughs*  Ahhh, you and your smoke bombs X)

@aislinn-mollisong

@introvert_girl

Thank you so much. This means a lot to me.

Hey everyone. I have a prayer request.

As my university life draws to a close, I have been on a hunt for a job and it has been very difficult and confusing. Both my parents will no longer be working soon so it’ll be up to me and my sister to support the family. The problem is that I am not entirely sure where or even what type of work I should…[Read more]

@anne-of-lothlorien  *shrieks and falls off chair*  AAAA! I LOVE THAT SO MUCH!! X’D

@dekreel

Sure. Here you go:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RPX7HA3UOkZD53L2Iow6n045t58yUrq8hLey3zT4npk/edit?usp=sharing

Since this story is abandoned, I won’t need a very specific and detailed edit or review. Just some general comments to improve my writing is all I’m looking for. 🙂

@introvert_girl

Yeah, I was going for a quick pace and…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart NVM, I’ll see it now XD

Okay, taking note.

All right, gotta scat. Byeee… 😀

@ariella-newheart  I’m signing off. But do go on about the roleplays. I’ll see it later 😉

Tell the Aethasians that a stalker from the Kingdom of Pen said hi XD

@ariella-newheart  Ooooh! 8-3  Does he come out just in time to help someone? Like if they were going through hard times?

Are there any roleplays you’d recommend that I read? I have read AMH and a little bit of the Nikko adventures. And a few posts of Origins

@ariella-newheart  I’m working on the KPA. At an interesting part……

I have a question about The Aetherlight: Is the Scarlet Man still roaming about in Aethasia, or is He somewhere else? The reason I’m asking is because of Xonos’ apparent encounter with the Scarlet Man in AMH…

I really hope I can join soon…

@ariella-newheart  X) I’m listening to a The Incredibles song! … And now a Finding Dory song XD

I love Pixar…

@ariella-newheart  AAH I didn’t see you! HII! Funny — I even tagged you… XD

Is it AMH?

I’m still here if anyone else wants to stop by…

@seekjustice  @rochellaine  @clairec  @ariella-newheart  @anyone

@gh24682468999  That’s so cool!! Did you get to look at the books?

Thanks! Seeya later 😉

@gh24682468999  Make sense! It is kind of tricky. I like haikus because they’re fun and fairly easy to compose.

Ummm… Sometimes I might glance through Snapper’s LOKD, but otherwise I just go by what I know, and what other Kapeefers tell me about themselves. It’s pretty easy X)

Have you ever heard of the ship Logos Hope?

@mnvalentine  I like the cover for Catcher in the Rye 🙂

@gh24682468999  Hi!! I’m writing the KPA again

Oooh, I love haikus! Have a collection of them myself. Had you ever written haikus before?

@rochellaine  @supermonkey42  @aislinn-mollisong  @dragon-snapper  @catwing  @winter-rose  @jenwriter17  @warrenluther04  @anyone

I’m writing!

*crosses fingers* I’d better make progress…