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valtmy replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@skredder @ariel-ashira @rochellaine @catwing
Good news: My project and exams are over now! (Though I am not too sure how well I did 🤣)
Thanks for the prayers! 😀
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valtmy replied to the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
Oops sorry. I put away the file and closed the link for this project because I wanted to keep my focus on my WIP (which I’m thinking of getting some reviews for as well). But I’ll still like to know your thoughts this! The link should be working now. Thanks!
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Is this boring???? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
@sam-kowal You actually counted the number of turtles in Daeus’ signature? Impressive! 😀
And @mnvalentine , I’m sorry I’m getting back so late: I was on hiatus. 😐
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Is this boring???? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
@mnvalentine I cannot read it as of right now because I have to go, but I just wanted to tell you that I’ll beta-read the first chapter for you and get back to you on this. 🙂 If I’m writing tomorrow, which I hope to be, I’ll read it. 😀 But I liked the
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Conference Season Starting…Kapeefer Meetups in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 (And everyone else on here obviously) COME OVER TO CALIFORNIA OVER SUMMER!!!!!! PLEASE! I need to meet Kapeefers!
I mean, I might be in D.C. next summer, but it’s not for certain yet so don’t plan on it.
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Joy replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x *appears from realm of the hiatus*
HiFileWriterIloveyourstorysofarcanIbeinittooit’sokayifit’stoolatethankyou!
*disappears again*
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valtmy replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@skredder @ariel-ashira @rochellaine
Thanks! 😀
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valtmy replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Hey guys I have a prayer request. I have a project at school as well as upcoming exams that I am struggling with. So if any of you can pray for me I’ll really appreciate it. Thanks!
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valtmy replied to the topic Contemporary Western Novel in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
OK I’ve requested access! 🙂
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valtmy replied to the topic The School Bully in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
I think the others have already given some very good responses so these are just my two cents:
#1: Think of other reasons for your bully to torment people apart from the cliche weakness, jealous or insecurity. For example, some usually nice people that I know unintentionally become bullies when a new person intrudes on the comfortable…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
I’m praying for you!
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Joy started the topic The School Bully in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
*appears out of nowhere*
Greetings, Kapeefers! I’m going to peak my head out of my hiatus for a second to ask some questions:
In my children’s books, I have a school bully, and lately I have been considering giving him a bigger part of my books. So my questions are: What are the motives of a bully? What are the literary cliches of a bully? And…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Oh dear, sounds rough. I’m praying for your friend.
Just read your post about the adoption. Will pray for your family and the kids too! Hope it goes well and gets settled soon.
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valtmy replied to the topic Lots of Crazy Keapeefers in the forum Poetry 8 years, 5 months ago
Aww… These poems are so fun and cute.
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valtmy replied to the topic Character Development Methods in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
My rule of thumb is that main characters should be both bright and deep. “Bright” as in they have some qualities that you (and hopefully your readers) find interesting (note: this is not the same as likable or attractive). “Deep” means that these traits come from a source (the characters’ past or background) that should at least be…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
Yep that was the plan. That’s why I introduced plot points such as the other members of the imperial family, the history of the empire, the assassin etc. because they will be relevant to the ‘adventure’ part of things.
But not everything was linking up and making sense. That’s why I have been stuck on this story for a long time and I…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
Glad you liked it!
My original idea was a sort of Man vs God thing. It draws upon the belief that our lives are ruled by “Fate” that was prevalent in ancient China.
Basically the setting is a story world where “Fate” appears to cause lots of silly love stories to happen and the “Rules” are basically just all the…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
Hmm… yes maybe that will work. I was planning on having a more sweeping epic but maybe a tighter story might suit the premise better. Thanks!
Sure no problem.
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valtmy started the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
I have a problem.
I tend to start off writing well but I have trouble deciding how to continue my stories. This causes me to get stuck and saps away my motivation to write. For my WIP, I have been trying to see if outlining will help but outlining is hard when I’m not sure how I want my story to go.
So just to try something new I’m putting one…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
Welcome fellow INTJ to the bestistest place on the internet! Hope you enjoy yourself here! 😀
So what are your favourite books?
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