@mkfairygirl
Active 2 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life.
ehhh that’s characters in morally compromised settings for ya though.
Even your absolute favorite will most likely always, always say something that you don’t quite agree with if their plot has to do with them dealing with, or being, questionable people.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@linus-smallprint thanks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
It’s a shame we can’t comment yet. I have some good ones.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@linus-smallprint ok! I’ll go read it!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Did you see that note in the appendix explaining what he is?
I didn’t! Where’s the appendix?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 11 months ago
@rae ohhh okay.
“blood eyes” sounds creepy but the concept properly described is actually really cool.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 11 months ago
btw I’m still working on that one story I promised you. I just have to type it up.
I was gonna do it today but my dad called me over and is basically offering me a job at the architecture firm he works at. So I had to listen cause I don’t have a job yet and coloring over floor plans all day sounds more fun than minimum wage at a grocery sto…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 11 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@linus-smallprint I haven’t, sorry. She’s kept writing it thoguh, right? I might go back and catch up.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@linus-smallprint Just so you know, you accidentally put chapter 33 before chapter 32, and you have chapter 30 twice.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 11 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@ellette-giselle awww that’s a shame! I echo Linus here, no one was hurt right?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed awww that was really cute.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@ellette-giselle you’re welcome!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@ellette-giselle I’m up for grammar/spellcheck!
Also to figure out what it was your siblings loved so much about the book.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 11 months ago
@whalekeeper yours are so wacky lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 11 months ago
all righty I got a bunch:
Chameleon woman joins a team of deranged human-animal hybrids and discovers they’ve all been made pawns in a plot spanning a century. Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.
Dragon-man from an unruly city…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 11 months ago
Bruhhh I should totally do this!! My stories have no shortage of weird.
Keep in mind that very few of them have names though.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Whoa.
That was….interesting.
Isaiah really does have a wonky moral code, ngl.
Nobody berate me for this cause it’s purely theoretical, but I had to kill a guy, and he had food, and I was hungry, I’d be taking the food. Not out of greed or wishing to thieve, but still. I see he said he didn’t want to steal and murder,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months ago
@grcr ohhh ok.
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