@mkfairygirl
Active 3 years, 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins so when Hemlock “properly introduces” Leo and Cross…….do you think she’ll hate her father at first for a while, or will she forgive him pretty early on?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@grcr ahh ok makes sense!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins ouch, sounds like it must’ve hurt then
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Crosshair is all silver, but Leo has a bit of blue on her spines….Also, Cross has a few scars and several of his tail spikes are snapped off due to all the torture he’s received.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh, and I like your planet/moon names.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins There’s one thing about Hemlock telling Leo the news that you’d have to put in the story beforehand.
If she’s with him, he’s most likely already experimenting on Crosshair, and shows him to her while he’s locked up (or being tortured….😬……sounds like Hemlock to do that though). Since the Empire confiscated his armor when they…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@grcr great job!!
One question: Where and in what time period is this supposed to be set? Because you refer to them as warriors and have them fight with old-style weapons, implying either a past or far future time period, but then refer to car accidents and computers (which I assume are computers like the one I’m typing to you on) like it’s set…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Lyn: I’m basically the starting performer of the show! I’m there to welcome the guests to Cirque and I show up whenever needed! I can be skilled in whatever’s needed at the moment since I’m a pretty quick learner, but my favorite thing to do is dance! I do love the trapeze and tightrope walking as well! Nyx and I perform together as…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
My poor baby just trying to figure out the world SOB
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper XD SEB LOL @rae @esther-c
Paxton
Paxton squeaked and hopped up further onto the bed, nearly climbing into Marcel’s lap as the large bird stared about the room, wings stretching for a moment before it settled back down.
He stared at it, and Seb, from behind Marcel’s sleeve, which he’d taken and hidden his face behind, still not all…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Lyn: I have my own room in The Main Tent, which is where perform our shows and have our big practice! It’s also where my Uncle stays! Nyx stays with me of course. It’s filled with hammocks and tapestries and pillows and everything and it has a makeshift galaxy on the ceiling that was made for me. It’s sorta…triangular shaped…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper Love this cuz Pax doesn’t have a baby book so he would have just been like “OH OK!” XD Also I went back and reread Seb’s thing with pax. They didn’t have too much interaction, but last thing that happened was he helped save him from his Brothers sooo they’d probably be on OK terms. But He’d probably scare him a bit despite them being…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Lyn: Actually-!
Nyx: Don’t you dare…
Lyn: He has worn socks before! And booties…SO CUTE! And hats. He’s the cutest little thing around!!!
Nyx:Â OH MY GOSH WOMAN STOP IT!Â
And yea, his collars range from average with a small bell or crystal or something and designs to immaculate
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper aww Marcel! Also imma have to go find and reread the seb one XD @rae @esther-c
PaxtonÂ
Paxton nodded quickly, thrilled to be able to help his friend. He swiftly moved toward the backpack and gently reached down, careful not to toss anything around as he lifted the yellow covered book.
“M-M-other s-said I could…c-could c-come…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Jocelyn: BAHAHAHAHA
Nyx: *Growls* NEVER! I WOULD NEVER WEAR A COSTUME! YOU COULDN’T MAKE ME!
Jocelyn: Well…there was that one time…
Nyx: *Screeches and jumps on her* WE PROMISED NEVER TO SPEAK OF THAT AGAINNNN!!!!
No, but he has worn EXTREMELY fancy “collars”
(I use quotations because uhh…don’t call them collars…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Paxton
Paxton’s eyes widened at the sound of his name and he froze, watching eyes turn to Marcel and then him. He cowered for a moment, feeling the stares before glancing at his pink-haired friend.
The boy, though no doubt exhausted and wounded, had a small smile on his face, eyes bright as he looked at the…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Jocelyn: *Happens to be wearing one of said outfits. Flounces around in it.* These are just the kind of outfits everyone wears in Cirque! We have a master seamster who puts together each and every outfit with careful precision and speed!
Nyx: Lyn’s outfits get special attention though
Lyn: *Giggles and grins like a cat*
For…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Writing from Pax’s POV is so fun sometimes because he has that childlike point of view and innocency but its so skewed at the same time, so you get to write it like a child, with not quite finished sentences, or exclamations that wouldn’t work for an adult, but at the same time it’s not all quite as innocent as it should be.
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