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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings
Eeee! Cammie and Milo! 💕 I didn’t know they were a couple at this point
XD that was funny.
Lol, yeah. They aren’t a couple yet in my WIP, but I was tired of waiting so they’re together here 😂 Although technically they aren’t a couple at the end of my WIP, but they’re definitely going in that direction. It’s more o…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6
Cammie
Elissa sighed, “What are we supposed to do?”
She has a good point. Cammie spoke up to the whole group, “Guys, we can’t just wait here in this room. We need to do something. We’ve found shelter, but we still need food and water.”
“We shouldn’t be aimlessly wandering,…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
I’ve been on quite a writing spree lately so hopefully it won’t be that long.
Can you send some writing spree magic over here? Please!!
Because (shhh) I’m in a slump.
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Felicity replied to the topic Character Playlists in the forum Music 3 years, 11 months ago
I wonder who my mc Tauren Faulkner is named after? 🤨
Oooo, I wondered. 😀 My sister used to listen to TW so I’m kind of familiar with him.
Ok, I thought it was a cool name 😂 so I used it in my WIP.
Nothing wrong with that!
Also the name start over is very applicable to my story. And the line “I’ll be right beside you when the…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Playlists in the forum Music 3 years, 11 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Eeee! Cammie and Milo! 💕 I didn’t know they were a couple at this point
Well, our characters need new goals, or we need to throw more danger at them. Maybe some people could go looking for food and water, or maybe Dietrich and Aldophus could show up if @freedomwriter76 wants. Or both.
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Loopy replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
I finally read chapters 3 and 4! I’m sensing a Keiryn redemption arc…
Also, the Tauren drawing is adorable!💕
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76
Milo
“So… you just write what you want to say, tell it to send, and it just delivers the message for you?” Carter asked Milo about his wristband. They were all sitting in the room above the trapdoor, waiting for anything.
“Yeah.” He would’ve guessed that this was obvious, but a…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
😍😲 Little Tauren is adorable! He played the guitar?! Awesome!
Ooh yes! Some world history! 😍
Waste of time.
Nope. No, it’s not. 🤣
Nobody wastes time on me.
😲😨😰😱😭😭😭 Poor Keiryn…
I LOVED the chapter!
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Felicity replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
I won’t say I’m speechless because, well, I’m speaking/typing :D, but those last two chapters were
so
so
good.
I love Tauren’s flashbacks!! And the hint of the civil war and the real world is so perfect! The last part about Keiryn makes me understand more about him and what he’s going through. I really feel for him! While…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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Felicity replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @starofthenorth @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @am I missing anyone on this topic?
Hello again, amazing, talented people!!! Unfortunately I got sick on Monday so I haven’t been on here since, but I’m finally starting to feel better! (my head’s cleared enough to be able to make coherent…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Thanks! 😂 I was eight or nine. I found it in my sketchbook from third grade.
Lol, thanks!
oh you are wrong 🤣 (I’m imagining a finger wag, too)
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @starofthenorth @arien @freedomwriter76 @anyoneelse
Um… here’s the comic I wrote when I was eightish. Enjoy?
(I’m putting it in a different post so it doesn’t disappear)
(Also, it has no connections to DC’s Supergirl. They have different colors, okay? And plagiarism doesn’t exist for eight-year-olds.)
🤣
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @freedomwriter76
I got distracted last night and didn’t actually do the rp, but here it is now! 😅
Simon
Simon waited in the room with the trap door feeling helpless. He had tried running after Kaine when he had left, but the kid had been too fast. Simon had given up quickly and returned to t…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
(Yeah…🤨 is my new way of saying HMMMM 🤐🤐)
I was cracking up while reading open under almost every single thing I said. 😂 That’s how I know I’m onto things… 🤐🤐
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
YES! Chapter four is here!
“I took it really well.” Keiryn smiles with pride. “I haven’t cried in two years straight.”
Um… good for you? 🤨😂
“Oh yeah! I forgot to introduce her to you guys. She’s living with us right now.” Keiryn turning towards them.
“Oh hi!” One of the girls reaches out her hand to shake Lesli’s. “Ple…
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Arien replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @starofthenorth
So here is one of the first things I wrote. It’s called “The Adventure #2.” I don’t know what happened to “The Adventure #1” but it did exist. It was about my stuffed animals coming alive and going under my bed to see what was there. I had so many stuffed animals, LOL.…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
I know I’m late to the party but . . .
AHH THIS IS SO GOOD! Great job, girl!😊😊
The chapters did seem kinda short, but the writing is good! I agree with @mineralizedwritings , maybe Riker’s seeming a little too nice for so early in the book? And though he is feeling conflicted, maybe it’s not quite enough? He seems like a good…[Read more]
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