@mineralizedwritings
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Loopy replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
I love it! I can’t wait to learn more about the world they’re in
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Felicity replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
Awesome stuff! I get so excited when I see you posted a new chapter! I really like everything. The outside world and what happened to it is making me curious and Keiryn keeps getting more mysterious!! Great job!!!!!!
Yeah, what IS going to happen next? 😀
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Light started the topic Pray for this Family!! in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 11 months ago
@Loopylin, @Godlyfantasy, @Mineralizedwritings, @ava-blue, @Arien, @Elishavet-pidyon, @Freedomwriter76, @Felicity, @Erica, @Theloonyone, @Koshka, @Whalekeeper
So…I wasn’t quite sure what to put this topic in, so I just chose a random one. Yesterday, my mom showed me a picture of a precious 7 year old little girl. She was murdered a few days…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
Thanks for reading!! I’m glad you liked it! Yes! This was my first try at present tense and I really liked it, so I kept it. 😀
Thanks so much for the tip! I will use it for sure.
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Light replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
Oh thanks! I’m so glad you like Lesli and Tauren!
You’re sooo welcome!! yes! they’re so Good!! 😀
I’m really savoring everything about how living underground is different, because they don’t know anything different….or do they? 🤨
Okay! Ooh mysterious… XD.
Anyways, 😂
It just y’know.. has to do with future thingys 😉…
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Light replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
Oh, I really like this!! I love the set up of their home and family life.
Just wondering, how far into the Russo-Ukranian war is it? From what I understand, is it just beginning?
Yeah, @mineralizedwritings tip about changing up the action words with ing and no ing could help the story flow a little better.
Anyway, I loved it! Can’t…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Oh, I’m so sorry!! I’m just rocking the ‘mistaking someones character for another’ thing this month XD, right @mineralizedwritings ? XD.
For some reason, I thought Kad was your character i guess bc he’s in the group with Eddie and Ellie (Those are your charries right?) and Dante and Rueben and others.
You can probably just ignore my…
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Erica replied to the topic Character Playlists in the forum Music 3 years, 11 months ago
@ava-blue @mineralizedwritings @felicity @freedomwriter76 @arien
Here’s basically my playlist for my WIP, Ruby Fire. (You might notice a fire theme, lol)
“I See Fire” (Peter Hollens)
“Burning” (Ludovico Einaudi)
“The Spheres” (Ola Gjeilo)
“Blackberry Winter I” (Nashville Chamber Orchestra)
“If I Can’t Love Her” (Terence Mann)
“Speechless” (Na…[Read more] -
Erica replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Your romance story is so cute!! I like it a lot.
Aww, thanks. There’s plenty more scenes I could share . . .
I threw a lot of them out because they were really cheesy. Everything was love at first sight except that the girl always pretended she didn’t know the guy liked her. 😂😂😂
Haha, same. In this story Irene is just like “Do I lik…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Carter
“Guys, we can’t just wait here in this room. We need to do something. We’ve found shelter, but we still need food and water,” Cammie said, addressing everyone.
“We shouldn’t be aimlessly wandering, though,” Milo said.
The group now stood and sat in a loose circle,…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @starofthenorth @theloonyone @godlyfantasy12
Here’s chapter two of the French-Revolution story I wrote when I was 10/11. 😀 The first chapter is on here somewhere!!
With original spelling and punctuation:
Life in the Castel -chapter two Elisabeth de Medicis
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Felicity started the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @folith-feolin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @starofthenorth @theloonyone @godlyfantasy12 @madelyn @wilder-w @elishavet-pidyon @anyoneandeveryone
Here is the first chapter of my WIP Overcome for anyone who wants to read it! I hope you all enjoy. Please critique it ruthlessly.
Glossary of…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
freedomwriter76 @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @felicity
Okay, heres the beginning of my old story, that I already posted so you won’t be completely lost bc it just plunges right back in XD.
Once apon a time there was a camel. The camel loved to drink some water at the forest and he swam across the ocean so he could get some water…
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Light replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
I am so sorry I’m just now responding!! Thank you for tagging me :). I LOVE IT!!! OMG sweet Tauren and Lesli!!
And Keiryn!! I feel myself wanting to like him, but also, not. XDD But i’m starting to get a feel for him :).
That’s cool that they live underground! Unless it’s like a spoiler that you don’t want to share yet, you…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Sure! I’m good with that! @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings Thoughts??
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Felicity replied to the topic Character Playlists in the forum Music 3 years, 11 months ago
12k… wow. That’s great!! Yeah I don’t know what’s actually fast or not. 😆
I know the NiNaRiMo….(however you spell it) writing challenge is to write 50k in a month…which is extra crazy fast. I’d say you’re doing pretty good. Yes stay away from burnout!! (Once you’re burnt out, it’s hard to start up again)
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Felicity replied to the topic Character Playlists in the forum Music 3 years, 11 months ago
hehe… I wanna spoil SOOO BAD. I won’t though. I can’t 😆 I’ll just have to write faster lol
I agree with @arien that’s so hard to do sometimes! But I’m sure you can…😊
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Felicity replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
That’s a good idea. I’ll try it. Thanks!
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Arien replied to the topic Character Playlists in the forum Music 3 years, 11 months ago
hehe… I wanna spoil SOOO BAD. I won’t though. I can’t 😆 I’ll just have to write faster lol
Definitely write faster, LOL. That’s so hard to do! Sometimes it’s just there and it comes out, and other times *cough*
nowit just seems . . . gone. 😂@ava-blue @felicity @theloonyone @freedomwriter76
I don’t exactly have a characte…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings
Matthew
I leaned against the wall, fiddling with a string on my shirt. Then I heard footsteps. And voices. Me and the rest of the group stiffened, waiting for something to happen.
The heavy wooden door opened, and a group of people was revealed.
There was Kaine, another young man, and…[Read more]
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