@mineralizedwritings
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
Thanks for the feedback!!
I think I want to keep the POVs as just Ev and Ami, so I’ll have to work on making sure that everyone’s feelings are shown, without using inner dialogue. Thanks for pointing that out. I didn’t notice it before.🙂👍
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @keilah-h
I’m back! Carter and Carmen have just been standing awkwardly to the side this whole time, I guess.
Carter
A bell rang twice in Carter’s ears. Kaine and Everly were gone. Carter stared at the spot they had been.
He began to panic internally as he processed what had hap…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
(And wow, everything you say about Layson–seriously, he draws an animal guide to make Tauren think a snake is a frog? LOL–reminds me of this guy I know whose name is really similar, so I keep picturing the guy I know happens to be my sister’s crush sorry
Hey now.
Yeah.
@godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
I hav…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @mineralizedwritings @arien @whoeverelseiforgot
So I have a romantic subplot in my WIP and I love it lol . . . 😍🤣
Christopher and Briana have an interesting relationship. When they are fifteenish (they haven’t met each other yet) their fathers sort of arrange for them to eventually get married.…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 10 months ago
@felicity @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6
I have pictures of my characters . . . let’s see if I can figure this out . . .j
Aha! Got it! This is Christopher.

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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @loopylin @esther-c Aww poor Everton! Matthew (my character) is always tripping/falling so when he sees Ev fall and knock down the armor😂 he’s probably gonna be like, “Yes! Finally, someone gets me!” XD
Matthew
Kaine and Everly fell backwards into a black hole. Kaine yelled, “We’re fine, Don’t worry about us!”…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings Thanks I figured it out!
@everyone
Okay guys here is Elinor, my beautiful baby girl: 😊😊

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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @lightoverdarkness @freedomwriter76
Milo
“Hey,” the boy standing in front of them said, standing beside a girl. How many times were people going to randomly run into them?
“Um, hey…” Milo said to them, readying his speech. “Who are you? Do you know where you are? We don’t either, so… we can’t really…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c
Feather
“So, Feather and Crosshair, huh?” Milo, one of the others in the group, turned to look at them.
Feather nodded. “Yep! If you want to know why we’re called that, our names were kinda given to us once we were already adults…it’s just the way our kind does things, I gue…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 10 months ago
@felicity @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @anyone else I forgot
So I know I’m changing the whole sibling-roasting thing back to moodboards, sorry . . .
BUT I FOUND PICTURES FOR MY CHARACTERS!!
These aren’t moodboards yet but I have some quotes chosen and I randomly googled stuff and managed to find great pictures! I’d never…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 10 months ago
My sister likes to do the “(describe really cute guy), but he has a awful smirk plastered across his face”
And I’m like,
No thanks.
Yeah, no smirks! Please! (Really need to try that one on my sister . . . her crush has quite the smirk when he wants to . . .) LOL 🤣
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Arien replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 10 months ago
Well, this is a very common topic for me and my older sister 😂🤣 The type of guys we like is pretty different, so we like to poke fun at each other for it. “Would you date a guy who (insert everything the other person likes) and also has a really ugly pet monkey? (But… he takes really good care of it and it’s for emoti…
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 (I think that’s everybody 😅)
Amidala
Amidala woke up with a start. She blinked her eyes open and looked around her. Stone walls? She pushed herself off the cold ground beneath her and tried to take in her surroundings. Was this a dream? Next to her, Everton looked around with the s…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @godlyfantasy12
Btw, 13 is a little long and (i think) 14 is a little shorter.
Chapter 13
Amidala and the rest of the group finally reached the next district. It was dark by now, but not terribly late. Despite that, they were exhausted. They traveled eight miles that day and weren’t used to w…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
Ooh, fun topic!
@godlyfantasy12 I’ve read only a little of what you’ve written, here and there (I haven’t been following the character castle or the school) but I think that Ara and November’s relationship is pretty cute! Especially because they’re best friends but somehow Ara doesn’t see that November’s like, head over heels in a giant crush on…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @freedomwriter76 @esther-c (if you’re joining) (I don’t know who is in this group anymore xD)
Sorry it’s been so long, school has been killing me…
Anyway!
Milo
Milo stared at the empty space where Kaine and Everly had been standing before they fell. The sound of a bell echoes…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Those character romances sound so cute!!! And fun to write! 😉
My charrie romances:
Everton and Amidala—
(Everdala)
Kind of similar to Ara’s and November’s, except that they both like each other and only drop hints, never actually telling each other the blatant truth the whole trilogy! 😆 By the e…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Feather
Kaine disappears.
How….?
Crosshair, who had been staring at him the whole time, steps back, shocked. “What…..”
A bell rings in the distance as the other characters eyed the place Kaine had been.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Awesome!! I don’t have time now, but I’ll definitely write a RP later this afternoon.🙂
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
You did a good job showing them back home! You think later you might switch to Layson and Maylee and Keiryn? Or back to Kaine and Everly? That was weird, I help like a part of me fell into the hole with them😂😭. I guess that shows how much I love your charries!! I think poor Matthew might have a…[Read more]
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