MineralizedWritings

@whalekeeper

She’d definitely want to know if someone else was describing him like that 😳😂

@esther-c

this snippet was from the POV of his girlfriend

I kind of figured haha, who else would be describing his symmetrical face? 😝

@whalekeeper

Oh yes… 😏 He’s one of the MCs in my current WIP, but this snippet was from the POV of his girlfriend (pretty much fiancée, let’s be real gang). 😜

@koshka

Yay, I tagged you for that topic!

@esther-c

Handsome Italian… I see. 😏

🫸🏻⚪️ @liberty

🫸🏻⚪️ @savannah_grace2009

Forgot about my snowballs, but got them written! I know I don’t have to share a snippet buuuuut….. I really want to. 🤣 So here you go:
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“Don’t try to turn her down.” Mrs. Palmer stood beside me, a knowing smile on her lips.

“Who?”

“Marzia. This is her way of accepting you into the family. She’ll be offended if you don’t let her spoil you.”…[Read more]

@loopylin hehe it really is

@koshka @ellette-giselle

Flash fiction is fun. I think like Koshka said, you have to skip all the introductions and try not to be too plotty. I remember my first attempt at a short story was too plot-focused, with a bunch of plot points, and I just managed to shave enough words off to keep the limit.

Actually I think…[Read more]

Love how quickly this topic is getting chaotic

Dang my post made a new page. I’m not trying to bury people’s posts ack

@ellette-giselle @raxforge @rae @grcr

Jonas made a post on the previous page addressed to everyone

@whalekeeper He’s technically new. A combination of two older characters. The Fel and Lois story is essentially becoming just a giant recycled mashup of all my old abandoned projects.

@ellette-giselle cool, what time period is this?

@ellette-giselle OOH! Looks cool! 😁

@ellette-giselle you’re welcome!!

@liberty I would say yes, but it’s kind of fun to watch as they multiply from the original two, and eventually we’ll get to the point where we have a lot flying. So no, sorry. You’re welcome to ask for tags though.

@ellette-giselle ohhhhh

that makes sense

also I like the covers for the books!

@ellette-giselle exactly how i like them lol

@theducktator that’s a good plan

@highscribeofaetherium @koshka haha I guess “not eating them” is a color then lol

@ellette-giselle

I guess I was sort of confused by Joseph’s fears about talking to Ezra, then. He seems to have multiple flashbacks to the soldiers, which is a good way to show how the events have affected him. I was probably confused (I’m assuming now that this scene is replacing the one before where he talks to three young men) about why he was…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Your new blurb sounds so cool! 😍

@ellette-giselle

I like it a lot! The only things I noticed were that you included the long excerpt from the Bible again… most readers already know the Christmas story so I don’t think you need it in there. Then, also, when Amelia was talking about Mary, some of the tenses seemed wrong. Like, maybe it should be in past tense? Idk. And last thi…[Read more]