Merie Shen

@rochellaine hey!!! I’m on now for a little while at least (hard to fit writing in these days…) are you on?

@ingridrd This is awesome! 😀

@rochellaine Hi! not sure if you’re still here, but just letting you know I can’t be on now, but I will be later in the day

@waterlily sure, welcome!

@notawriter I guess we can just carry the discussion through today and tomorrow if that’s okay with everyone

Question, ladies…..

Today we were supposed to read Ruth chapter 1 and have discussion tomorrow. So, do we wanna just read today and not post any comments until tomorrow? Or have discussion on through tomorrow until the next reading?

@rochellaine Yeah we might not want to show normal people (that would be non-writers) this topic here and our weird , uh, interesting poem topics. 😉

lol, maybe Charlie’s mother needs to snap herself out of it and pull Charlie away from that! 😀 😀 😀

@ariella-newheart cool!

@pickupyourpenandwrite Yes it’s today! (March 2nd) wow, I just saw you posted at 2:44 am my time 0.0

I’ve actually already read the chapter. I’m not sure what time zones everyone is in, but has anyone read it yet?

@rochellaine  Oh, sorry I missed you! See you!

I haven’t. Not since Sam’s Ninja Gypsy poem.

Umm…… I wrote a time travel story when I was little X’D

Buh bye!

@rochellaine  Ahhhh, that explains the name! Interesting! I wonder why they didn’t just hire a French actor…

@rochellaine  I have no idea how long I’ll be up… When I’m finished writing, I guess.

Can you ask your brother what he thinks about that Chain of Command episode, too? (Part 2, specifically?)

What time is your story set in?

@rochellaine  Editing the KPA a bit. I think it really needs some tweaking. But at least the plot is in place! FOR ONCE!

How about you?

@rochellaine  I’m still here! I’m a night owl 🙂 Hehe, and it seems I’m not the only one *high-fives fellow night-owl*

@itisastarrynight

Is Jenna yourself, or one of your OC s?

I just now saw this question… Nope, it’s an OC. Not me 🙂

@rochellaine wow, thank you! I’m glad your sister liked it too. 🙂 (I may be hooked on writing poems now. Rochellaine, what have you done to me?)

I dunno maybe Charlie just rocked the dance floor with the octopi 😉 🙂

@daughteroftheking well, the helichrysum oil actually helps to build tissue (but I’m not sure exactly what kind of problem you’re having). The comfrey salve just heals things generally. But you can’t apply it to an open wound or a surgery wound. I think it helps with broken bones too. my brother used it on his broke toe. But if you’re going to…[Read more]

@seekjustice  CONFETTI CANNON!

@rochellaine  @kaya-young  @jenwriter17  @anyone

I’m editing!

@kaya-young  *blinks away tears*  That’s such a beautiful song! Wow… It’s amazing. Thanks for sharing it! 😉

@reaganramm  I just watched the video.

I… I didn’t know you did this for me!! X’D   BTW, it’s pronounced DEE-kreel XD (see signature)

Anyway, thanks SO much for the video! It was really good advice 😀

Wow. You guys make me smile X’D

@dragon-snapper  *looks at un-melted chair* *looks at you* *looks back at chair* Whoa. Thanks, Snapper!

Also, when I read “He won’t let you go,” I almost cried. It’s so true. Have you heard that Switchfoot song, I Won’t Let you Go? That’s what came to mind. (Obviously HAHA)

@audrey-caylin  Woww, I LOVE that m…[Read more]

@kaya-young  The first part would flow much better if you separated the topics like this:

“You did a really good job with your prayer!”
“Thanks.”
Who wrote it again?”
“It was Teresa of Avalanna.”

And obviously you can put the non-dialogue parts where you find the most fitting.

At the end of the second part, maybe occasionally tell what the ch…[Read more]