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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Okay okay okay
Nevermind
XD
That’s just my personal opinion lol. I’m not saying you should do that, I was just saying how I feel. I don’t know…I just really really hate the idea of people getting married young, and I’m not sure why. So you do what you want with your story! See, this is why I need to stop looking at your book…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
I know I said I was going to leave, but I’m just bored lol!
also, one little issue I have: maybe wait till Sabina’s at least 18? I’m 17 and I wouldn’t marry a guy now even if I knew him very well. My mom got married at 17 but I was under the impression she was the exception.
I agree with Keilah.
I know your story is set in medieval times, so th…[Read more]
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-GRCR- posted an update 2 months, 2 weeks ago
It’s better to find the source of a problem and be unable to fix it than it is to fix the problem without knowing its source.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you!! 😁
I don’t know if I’ve asked you this or not yet, but what software do you use for your drawings?
I use Clip Studio Paint.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Woah, wait… wow. Thank you! 😄😄
And thanks for the criticism!
except maybe his tunic wouldn’t have as dark of cuffs and collar, and there might be a bit of embroidery. Then again, this could be him in military uniform and then it works perfect.
Ohh… ok. I was concerned about that…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Lol I love this! 😈😈 And I am suddenly motivated to write lolol.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@everyone @i’m-feeling-to-blah-to-actually-tag-anyone
*caveman voice* I wrote. I post.
Here is an Evelyn pov/rp… Hopefully you guys haven’t already made a kitchen part of the castle…. if so, i can change this up or something…. cuz that’s kinda where she lands… though I don’t think I described good.
Alright, must go hide.
EVELYN
Her eyes…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Umm… I clicked submit, but…uhh… my post disappeared. I’m reposting, so sorry if you get this twice…
ahhhh…. sorry i’m responding late-ish…. my days have become sooo busy lol 😅😑
I did draw him… today… just now…
So… here is my picture of Friedrich…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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-GRCR- posted an update 2 months, 2 weeks ago
My novel TPE | https://editor.reedsy.com/s/RPRuZql
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Okay… here is my character. I may or may not add another later, if that’s ok… but for now I’m only doing one. 😁
Evelyn Bargomer
Age: 17
Ethnicity: In my book, she’s fully Burnish-Extroitian. If she were in the real world/from earth, she’d probably be a mix of South Korean, Chinese, and like Swedish, Danish or Norwegian… or…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 3 weeks ago
I agree with Whaley…I need to step away too.
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 3 weeks ago
HOW DO YOU DO THAT?!??!?!
Wow it’s like you can read my mind lol!
Anyways….
I totally agree with what Whaley said.
The time jumps just take away so much from the story (even at the beginning where Aaron and Turin were working together) and it makes me lose interest. You do great at describing outside of the…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Guys we should bring this back XD XD XD
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
ISN’T THAT CRAZY?!?!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
SARA ACTUALLY WROTE FOR ONCE IN HER LIFE
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Bwahahaha you guys aren’t going to believe what just happened
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Just popping in because I’m bored, lol!
I kinda agree with Whaley. The story just doesn’t seem like it’s going towards a specific goal…like the events seem a bit random and idk how to describe it but it’s like your story’s missing something but it frustrates me because I don’t know what exactly I’m missing, just that something…[Read more]
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Sara posted an update 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Hey peoplessss
School started for me today :/
Have I missed anything, lol!
I added a couple new chapters to my story…hehehe-
Good luck with school!
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thanks girl!
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Heeeyy. 😄
I’ve been reading all your chapters still!! I finished 33, like, a while ago, lol! 😁 I really like how you’ve “officially” included Livia in it, and I really like that last scene where she blows the Pythonos away!
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OMC JULIA!!! <3
Hi!!! Aw thank you so much! For some reason I don't really like the last three chapters…but oh well XD everyone else seems to love them soooo *shrugs*
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