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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic idk what to call this but… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months ago
@esther-c @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @theshadow @theducktator @whalekeeper @rae @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @grcr @hybridlore
So most of you probably remember my little project back in March, you know, the collection that I put together that was a mix of poetry and short stories, allegories and things like that. I gave it to my youth group as part…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
Thank you for reading it 💜
It’s probably my favorite thing I’ve ever written!!!
Thank you for sharing. I’m going to screenshot this and save it to my phone, if that’s okay.
yes that’s totally okay! I’m honored that you want to, honestly!
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-GRCR- posted an update 4 months ago
I’m prolly one of the worst responders ever.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months ago
UGH! KP signed me out as I was typing! That’s a new one. *sulks*
Let’s try this again……
I’m starting to get a feel for the amount of siblings! I pick a few to keep an eye on and the rest sort of come and go. It’s like getting to know a family with a tone of kids. (which is what it is, lol)
lolol
yaaayy
Not sure what “Thok” means. This is…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
Maybe I should have tagged some people but oh well XDXD
Imma wait a day before I bother any of you lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
I just wrote this short story thingy (i have no idea what to call it) but I wanted to share it with you guys <3 I feel like God wants someone to hear this!
No matter how dark your past is, there is hope. Jesus loves you and will ALWAYS come to rescue you!
Helpless.
Weak.
Pathetic.
Ugly.
Broken.
Shattered.
Crippled.
These are mere fragments…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months ago
I couldn’t be bothered with hands so just ignore them.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months ago
Okay after a long time… I have new chapterrrr heeheehee… !!
@elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @anyone-interested || Tagging you three since you responded… but if you’d rather not be tagged just lmk… 😛
Also, Elishavet, I saw your other message but didn’t know what to say. I agree with what you said, and I tried to add some more de…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Glorifying Sin?? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months ago
OMC that’s crazy because when I read your post I thought it was an example from the Cloak of Light books XDXD
and yes it’s crazy…I agree they’re cool but holy moly the theology *cries*
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic What's one thing you know now that you wish you knew when you started writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 months ago
that’s so real 😭😭😭😭
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months ago
Oh my word girl I am so sorry!!!
Even though nothing’s been officially diagnosed yet, I’m sure it’s hard :/
I’ll be praying that God gives you all peace, and that the results come back SUPER QUICK (because waiting is so hard!! especially with something like this) and I will be praying that it’s NOT cancer or anything serious like…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months ago
600+? That’s… a lot of characters… You’ve got a lot of patience.
lol yeah… 😅 it never feels like that many though, when I sort them into the friend groups and families they belong in.
How long did it take you to do just those 28?
Ignoring my week-long moments of procrastination… about two days or so. I frequently forgot abo…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 1 week ago
I am working on drawing all my 600+ peoples alphabetically, and I decided to start with B…for no reason in particular. I have five left.

Unfortunately it’s missing my girlie Billie because I created her after I started this… ugh.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Ah. No one “on screen” got shot, just the neighbors in the background, if that makes any sense.
😜
🤍🤍
I also thought it was interesting how Elia’s comment “it’s dangerous out there” put all the danger outside, so when it was followed by cozy family time, we felt safe inside. Like the Igby Cottage in WFS. Then ev…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
lol there was a space in the actual doc, I don’t know why it didn’t transfer over…
This seems a little odd, because 1. it is one of the more standard ways of swearing an oath, and 2. as a soldier he would know this from training and wouldn’t need to be told. I would say something like “swear the oath” etc. Something that tell…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
eeeee yay!! 😃 I’m pretty much open to all feedback… yeah.
(I actually thought the dad was gonna die in this chapter from scene 1…. so I’m relieved that he made it. XD)
LOL
It’s like a family I know, expect they have 15 kids and it’s all “J” names.
😅 I guess great minds think alike lolol
Yeah, it’s not vital. It probably wo…[Read more]
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-GRCR- started the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Hello hello hello.
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I’m rewriting TPE (I’ve renamed it to A Fire Within btw, so I’ll probably call it AFW instead) for the billionth time and I’m pretty happy with it so far, so I’m going to start sharing it again. Andddd… yeah. Tagging everyone I can think of atm, but feel free to ignore. I don’t want to bother anyone. 😅😅
@elishavet-pidyon
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