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@whalekeeper

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

Aww thanks!!! That means a lot <3

Yeah Liv’s pretty sweet!!!! I love her so muchhhh

@keilah-h

Yes I’d read it!!!!!!!

@keilah-h

Wow you do read fast!!!!!!!!!!

XDXD

What did you think???

@theducktator

Sounds good!

@esther-c

😂😂🤣

@esther-c

Okay, end of February it is!!!! XDXD

@liberty @jonas @highscribeofatherium @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

Thanks everyone!!!

You guys can use the link on my profile to read it, and then post any comments here, if that works?

@esther-c

What’s a reasonable deadline? There’s 19 chapters as of now, with more to come lol

It depends on how fast you can read XDXD

@esther-c

Ahhh that’s so funny lol

Livia

“Thanks,” she exhaled hard. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to dump all this on you. But yeah, that’s why I’ve been acting weird.”

Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol

Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?

I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll

Not that I care what people think, but it…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks!!!

Aubrielle’s her older sister.

Aw :/ so sad *cries*

@keilah-h

Thanks!! 😄

@keilah-h

Do you have a pinterest account? If you’re logged in it should work.

@keilah-h @anyone-else

If you want to know what things in my book look like, like people, places, etc, here’s a link to my pinterest! I have a lot of boards with pictures that describe several characters and races in my book!

https://pin.it/3TYRfqUSE

@keilah-h

Yeah, he’s pretty cool!!!!!!!! <3 I love Xandro

@keilah-h

Here’s a good pic of what he’d look like:

Anyone want a Marcurious scene…???

@theducktator

omc

girl you are so funny XDXDXD

@keilah-h

Xandro can’t manipulate water on his own, and he does have power, but his powers lie “dormant” unless an Aquino combines their powers with his. It basically just gives the Aquino more capacity to manipulate moisture, if that makes sense!

But without an Aquino, he’s just a normal horse…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thank you so much!! 😄

😜

Pockets are a good idea. My mom hates drawing hands so she always sketches her characters with them in their pockets or behind their backs. (If you want only one hand in the pocket you can turn the character slightly so that his hip and leg hides the other hand.)

Ah, yes, that’s always a good idea.…[Read more]

Here’s a random scene from WIP

Livia and Aubrielle are currently fleeing for their lives, trying to make it to Erstonia…

Glistening sand stretched out for miles…

At first, Livia had thought it was beautiful and mesmerizing, but now she hated it with a passion.

There was sand everywhere.

Sand in her teeth, sand on her tongue, sand in h…[Read more]